by JoeDreamer
Come on Chapter 7!!! Awesome story man, just perfect!!!
Amazing story, well developed storyline. Finally, checking your profile for months has paid off. One of the best, I dont normally vote since I feel 1-5 scale is oversimplified, but your story definatly deserves a five. Aside from a few homonym errors such as throes and throws, it was a wonderful read. There is much talent at your fingertips, keep up the good work. I am looking forward to the next installment ... eventually, no rush. You cant force inspiration.
I haven't read any story of yours that wasn't top rate! I hope there is another chapter coming soon!! Thanks for all of the great stories! Great work!!!
I love this series, teenagers enjoying being young as long as no one gets pregnant this way it's all good. I like that there is no need for drugs as many stories find that an easy way to start. I also loved the dude getting slapped out and losing his keys well done!
This is great! Teenagers can be hormonal and have lots of sexual energy and this story captures that.