All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 06'

So does Jess have a twin she doesn't know about? Thanks for clearing up the mystery of why Nick felt Jess was just playing with him. Great job!

Very good! That couldnt have been jess! maybe a look alike!? Great story! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

Great story and nice change to a contemporary series. Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing! :-)

I would think that her twin sister is the one already mentioned in the story before and not a mystery sister, though we can't know for sure yet. ;-)

please post the next chapter soon! I love this story and I can't wait to read the next part!!!!

There I was, happily catching up on all this, and now, looking innocently for chapter 7, I've got a damned broken nose from hitting against a brick wall!

It shouldn't be allowed! :-)

Great story, Great writing! More, please, as soon as you are able. ;-)

Roger

P.S. The nose was like that anyway, now I come to think of it!