All Comments on 'Hades Ch. 02'

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psychedelicmothpsychedelicmothover 16 years ago
I'm Hooked

Great job as usual! Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm loving it

You have me absolutely hooked on this story. Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
love your rendition

Please continue!!!

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 16 years ago
Ooooh a developing story of quality

Your story has grown lovely and tempting with this second chapter. The twists and turns that are starting to show will lead to a very fun read. Thank you and please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTERS

I love romantic works centering on Hades/Persephone. But if you want the romance formula to work, please refrain from using crude terms like "cock, cunt, cum, fuck," and exclude descriptions of acts of fellatio and sodomy when writing the love scenes, otherwise it won't work out at all.

Again, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Don't disappoint. ; )

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