All Comments on 'Devotion'

You had another submission to Lit. I'm glad I decided to find out if you had written more stories. You paint such vivid pictures with your words. Your stories are almost like poetry.

i was there on my knees.my body sore and tired.tied up by my lust,for this facinating man. i lived every second of that scene. i could feel my lungs burning from lack of air. my throat struggling against the gag on that huge crown of cock,wedged deep in there. his dark hypnotic eyes drilling into mine,stealing my will. holding his slut captive. and OMG when his hot cream hit my face! wow! i must say snick5908 you have a huge talent for spinning a tale. so thrilled you are sharing your gift with us. please,please write more. brooklyn.

Is This about people WE Know ???? DADDY

I like the way you focus on Him, to Know what He wants , the devotion to Him ...