All Comments on 'The Flooring Guy Ch. 02'

by d_flowered

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What a Slut!

Slut wife, wimp hubby...

Orion623Orion623over 16 years ago
Interesting

Debbie seems to have relaxed her standards from only a blow job to full-on sex. Frank and Tim have lucked out with a piece of her ass. It remains to be seen if the other guy she was dancing with on Friday night gets lucky Saturday night. And how is she going to explain (hide) the hickies from Todd?

Debbie doesn't seem too bright so it will be interesting to see if she can keep Todd unaware of her one-nighters. Todd may yet prove to be a wimp but there isn't enough evidence of Debbie's indiscretions for him to be know he has been cuckolded.

I'm looking forward to reading the next two parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your not courious

you are just bad for every person you meet. you have a cheating mind and will do so, whether you kill someone with aids or not, you wont' care. so stop writing bitch this has nothing to do with erotic fantasies

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Not very erotic, but a little disgusting. She is not interesting, just a stupid slut.

wigwam25wigwam25over 16 years ago
Well done

I see the usual anonymous nebbishes are making their presence felt. You guys are only revealing yourselves for what you really are: spineless wimps who don't have the courage to take responsibility for their comments.

This is a sexy story, told by a woman who really understands men's fantasies. Please keep writing, d-flowered.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A woman with no brain out to get laid, how

immature! As one reader wrote, she is just waiting for the right man /// to give her AIDS so she can pass it on. Wigwam, grow up man. Anon is as good of a nick as wigwam or anyother made up nick. A reader is a reader, all comments are by persons who have read the story and have their opinion, just becuase you lack morals and ethics doesnt mean everyone does.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Next?

Hope you continue this one day... PLEASE (even if it's Ashley, lol)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Who's Ashley?

A strange woman showed up in the 8th paragraph from the bottom.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 10 years ago
Other then

The typo or wrong name this was a good second chapter to this tale. You see the various comments above that do not deal with the story or how well its written buy simply condemn Debbie. You have to wonder why they don't condemn Frank or Tim, because they know that if they were Frank or Tim or the nameless dancer, they would have enjoyed Debbie too. Amusing to read them, but since they add nothing then why are they still here? - Kevin

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 8 years ago
Statements and Thoughts

The technique of quoting a character, then adding that character's silent thought is awkward. In most cases it was also obvious, therefore unnecessary!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
She hopefully

Has a job and somewhere else to live.

Todd will not let her live with him and his new wife and Barbie won't let her near her own Cuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Garbage

Isn't it funny when these female writers always make it the guys fault she turned into a unfaithful cunt..... The bitch made choices, now I hope she dies a disease filled death....

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Talk about a cheating whore getting desperate. A flooring contractor.

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