All Comments on 'Eastern Traditions Ch. 1'

Nice begining hope it continues in the same spirit.

this is one great idea of a story - why only two parts?

Tahal has sadistically taken the most precious freedoms from both Omal and Vivian. Then he compounds his cruelty by pitting them against each other in a dilemma situation for his pleasure. Their revenge can be to bond with each other thus denying Tahal the excuses he wants for punishing them further. Tahal's sadism will still come forward, but he will not be able to blame them for his excesses.