All Comments on 'Faithfulness and Fidelity'

This story is so stupid that it's beyond comment. This writer has such a devious mind that he probably jerked off while writing this. What a loser.

Just when I thought it wouldn't get any worse, IT DID!

I am not sure of what this is,but one thing it isn't and that is a good story.Why didn't you call it "A slut with two ass holes"

This what ever it is, sucks.

Talent wasted is just a waste by someone who should know better.

I found very funny all the detractors that read the 3 chapters and liked non of them.

Jusr read this and don't need to read anymore by this writer, vote 0 and move on to somebody who can write

The 'other shoe' is yet to fall, I feel.

And I shall be waiting for it!

Bad from one to three, quit while you are ahead.

Since you have stated this is a three chapter story, thus the end of this fantasy, I can now say it was really bad. I had hoped you would pull it together with a reality of life. No you kept it a secret in your mind. I guess as one person said before Artsy-fartsy crap is what we are left with. This doesn’t challenge the mind it clutters it. I hope you got this so called high plain sophistication out of your system as it doesn’t fly.

For all of Mungo's detractors, I would remind you that a heckuvalot of his stories have red H's by them. So..learn to write sumthin better before you whine.

If ben just went away, i doubt she would really care. and if ben was not faithful, she may have the same feeling.

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A sick slut.

A sick slut says she shit slovenly sideways shoving strange (in her) slit.

HA Ha ha

I crack myself up sometimes.

drowning in jism, he swallowed the slimy load, betrayed!

Too sick to even rate. This whore.is really sick.

if any thing it was pushed to the forefront, TK U MLJ LV NV