All Comments on 'Mrs. Claus! Ch. 01'

keep it comming, the seduction was great!

it is as though you are well versed in the fetish of a younger man for an older woman. Older women are so much easier to get on with when your a young studd with hormones to spare

Even naughtier gran.My dad had a lewd saying it goes as follows,"you might as well catch them when they are closing as when they are opening",what did he mean.

beautifully done, just don't use xmas that sucks.great story though.

...detracted from the overall tale. Edit your work, or find someone who can, and ratings will improve.

Dream on!.. A good story?.. I think not. Score 50%.

Why 50%?. because of it's lingo. Feels Real?. I think not.

Keep on writting?. Now thats a hard question.

good story but maybe a little longer to get your interest going and maybe in your next story include mom, as they had pictures together

yeah, the olderwoman/young boy thing is great, but it is a bit too long.

A little long winded, but excellent overall. WOO HOOO FOR Mrs. Claus and her wild Christmas Nookie! Great writing!

I love the older hesitant womans final seduction with the love and tease that went from the beginning.Descriptions of her and situation were great. I still picture her today after reading story last night. A real kind charmer she is.

Mature women are fine an need lovin too, good damned story and tkankx...

NOT BAD FOR YOUR FIRST STORY, CHAPTER 2 SHOULD GET MOM INVOLVED BUT KEEP GRANNY FUCKING SHE SOUNDS HOT TO TROT. OH ! GRANNY. NICE READ KEEP GOING. THANK YOU LAROC OF AGES

The lineaments of gratified desire.

What is it women most in men desire?

The lineaments of gratified desire.

Sexy, well written story. Slow build up to great climax.

I like the slow build and the description of a story. Not the wham, bam, thank you ma'am quickie stuff. The setting was realistic/very plausible and the comments about himself were good. I've met a few mature women that resemble Grandma Claus, only in passing though. Even though they were in their 60's-70's they still had it going on! Some of them even flaunted it!

I would echo (the others) that a sequel (Please) should have mom and son become involved (through Grandma's instigation ofcourse). However no threesome, I think it would just ruin the setup. Him becoming Grandma's and mom's lover would be just fine. A trilogy (fingers crossed)! He meets his future wife, older woman 8-12 year older than him. Teacher, librarian or a Masters student teaching in college? Quiet and reserved she's really a sex kitten that discovers his relationship with Grandma and Mom. She's supportive (it turns her on something fierce) but again no threesome or foursome sex just one on one. Okay, maybe voyeurism but that's it. Anyway my 2 cents. Keep up the good work!

And yeeeaaah... a proof reader would be a good idea.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!