All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 05'

Its getting better and better, I just wish there was MORE! I love this but its always sucks when it ends without knowing what comes next!

Its getting better and better, I just wish there was MORE! I love this but its always sucks when it ends without knowing what comes next!

eeep. Ok, I'm loving this story line and the characters. Buuutttt, I need a better explaination for the fact no one wondered how/why/where she disappeared to...one minute she was there and the next...poof?

What a tease. I loved the end.

She dissapeared right in front of their eyes and nobody is wondering how could this happen? For that matter, how can a Lycan dissapear, that's not part of their powers...there has to be a reason, and the pack knows it. I love this story, but this part didn't make sense, some research or world building would have been appreciated, adding to the plot.

Is it tomorrow yet? I love this story. I wish that there was more. I am an addict now. Thanks, it gets me out of bed in the morning

Oooo i cant wait for the next one in this story! *sits and waits*

You guys are serious? This is not your story! You cannot say what is and what is not! At that, it wasn't her that made herself dissapear! It was that Rave or Rayoul or whatever the hell his name was.

Byah!? I. Love. This. Story.

Jenna went poof because of Rafe. Follow the story-line people! I adore this story very much. :-D

To the post just before this one: Of course it was Rafe, because we're the readers. But why didn't the Weres react? They didn't know about Rafe.

Still loved it, though. Heh.

Too short.

Such a clever hiding place for an assassin to hide the weapon of choice.....there goes that snide bitchery thing again...

If it was me as Aisslyn I would have gone to Jenna's head and let her show her true self.. but still a great story

I'm not getting the timing of this – Cullen rushes off to save his pack, then suddenly he's getting a blowjob while he waits for the attack? Holding a poisoned stiletto inside her is a ridiculously elaborate way to try to kill him – you're trying too hard.

He rushed off because he didn't know when the attack would happen, and then had to wait with arousing suspicion.

only 1 page a chapter is really much too short.....and inconvenient...but nonetheless a well thought out story...

Thanks for posting

Why would the Alpha of the other pack promise retribution when his daughter just suddenly vanished? Shouldn't they think something was up when everyone was watching them????

Doesn't make much sense

i would rather fewer chapter with longer chapters but that is just me but that is just me other than that i love it hope you keep up the good work and start to make your chapters longer the short chapters just give it that spank story feel to me but like i said eairlyer that is just me

I would also like longer chapters, but not fewer. I would like to see many more.