All Comments on 'Caveat Emptor Ch. 02'

I like the lack of names. It makes for a level of intimacy that pulls me in. I like the length of your submissions.

It’s beautifully written, plenty of suspense and drama, I love that you make the reader aware of the safety protocols in place (far too many don’t), being safe IS sexy. The only thing that gives me pause is the pain, it’s not suited (or necessary) for everyone. Only time will tell if she wants the pain, some people thrive on it but pain just for the sake of giving pain is wrong.