All Comments on 'Hell Hath No Fury'

Oh so funny, i love the end:-) Bested shakespeare here:-P

Sort of felt bad for Carl, for what he was about to experience, but then again, you play with fire, you're gonna get burned.

of two equally sexually deviant people going at each other does not leave much for the reader to relish as a story. <p>

but if i were the big dicked neighbor to this woman, she'd find out sooner than she think what it reall means by the phrase "hell hath no fury". the bitch should just count herself luck she's had some taste of my big cock; but being a literally loose, old pussy, why the hell must i stay with her, when there are younger bitches to fuck? <p>

i mean, come on, stupid bitch! who the hell do you think you are? <p>

think back to the 1980s FATAL ATTRACTION between Michael Douglas and Glen Close: She said, threateningly [actually, I think with a knife], "I am NOT going to be ignored!!" It's a demand, not a request or pleading. <p>

we all know what happened to her: her little neck was broken; or perhaps she was just being held under water for a few minutes, with Michael Douglass big hands around her little neck! lol <p>

stupid bitches like this woman should count herself lucky you have plenty of not-so-choosy big brothers who would fuck her silly everyday, if she's clean enough. no matter what, she'd eventually lose her husband, if not before she gets her little neck broken by some big dicked brother who knows little more than using a gun and that dick...

this is pure junk

not sexy or arowsing just a lame attempt at writing

I don't think I have ever laughed so much. The visuals that your excellent writing prompted in my mind had me laughing so hard my wife thought I had gone quite mad until I moved over for her to read it, I knew it would have the same effect. Great story, thoroughly enjoyed.

drooge

read was ---------STUPID

Well......very interesting. And well-written. But it seems that there should be more to the story. It's as if the story "stops", without "ending". There should be some aftermath, some closure.

-- KK in Texas

Ha! That was great. :)

What happens to Gail when her fantasy is switched? What happens to Linda when Carl kills her?

LMAO!

A married women committing adultry over a long period of time with a man who she clearly has no romantic interest in becomes so jealous of him breaking off with her, she sets the guys wife up to be killed by him? How long after he is free will it take him to read the instructions and figure out who wrote them? Does this woman realize how short her life expectancy is? Does anyone actually think anyone is that stupid? Forget that, prisons are full of people stupid enough to do shit like that.

the author a sick idiot.

revenge would be swift and final after this. The one to suffer should be Gail, she needs to die. She's the unfaithful wife, the seducer, the one that destroys lives. She really needs to die.

Delightful reading ,I loved it, it made me laugh real hard, seriously, this is the sort of revenge i would love to impose on my ex, think most women did at a moment fantasize such a revenge:-)

When is Gail getting hers for cheating on Jack?

"What happens to Linda when Carl kills her?"? .. Seriously, Anonymous? -.-;

This probably should have been categorised as dark humour!

Gail had better run... but women can sometimes be very stupid when dealing with consequences. Carl will probably become completely depraved or completely docile, haha!

Side note, never ever let those deep dark fantasies come out. Bury them in the darkest corners of your mind and let them die. Remember your spouse may have wilder fantasies, not involving you in a good way.

Hope Jack takes her on a nice trip to Africa and leaves her there with out a passport or money.

YOU are one sick SON OF A BITCH, may your existence be very short ! !! !

omg! lmao well, pay back is certainly a bitch!

Hardly. With no ending the story is crap. The only clear thing is that Linda is going to prison for years and years and years. Assault, battery, illegal restraint, sexual assault, sodomy, rape and spousal abuse just to name a few of the charges. Unless she kills him and has a perfect plan to get rid of his body, she's toast. She'll be in prison during their divorce and he'll keep all the marital assets. Beyond stupid story. Made worse by the fact that it has no ending.

No stars as even giving this crap one star would be an insult to the star.