All Comments on 'Reflections'

two things: you had a chance to explore a loaded word "refection" - you didn't, the other Aerigon, if you would take the time to explore other's writing (here) you would begin to discover what cliched thinking is all about, and hopefully avoid it. At best what you have is a song in your head right now, pop relies on cliches, refrains, it has a tendency to kill poetry. FWIW.