All Comments on 'Dorm Room'

This has to be one of the silliest stories I've read, and might be better fitted under the "humor" section. The it's ok you can impregnate me and my daughter has to be the major source of fiction that is in this. I'm sorry, but I couldn't be turned on by something that is so unrealistic otherwise I would've looked in the alien porn section.

Doesn't know how to get his dick inside her? Get real... Detail are good, but really weak start. Try to come up with a more realistic scenario next time.

You can do better than this, can't you? I couldn't stand to read past the weak start.