All Comments on 'Peer Pressure: Jenn's First Story'

by random83

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lovercat2942lovercat2942over 15 years ago
Please try harder, random....

Very poorly written. Started off on a nice premise and then deteriorated badly. Tiffany and Sarah are stereotyped, mean clods that weren't described much beyond their sex organs and catty mouths. Then, the story ended right in the middle, leaving Jennalyn, the only halfway decent character, in the breach.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

sequel?

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 11 years ago
I want ...

you to do a fast forward piece. 6 or 8 years into the future when Jenn is the head of the tech company that one (or both) of the other two want a job at. A little power reversal would be just the ticket.

dirtyhotcherry69dirtyhotcherry69over 10 years ago
sooo hot!

this was sooo hot!! loved it!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please do a part 2

Please do part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Fucking bitch you got my pussy so wet.. fuckkkkkkkkk I would love to eat those beautiful snatches

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Stupid as hell they didn't really make you do anything you wanted to do it all

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