All Comments on 'Stress Relief'

by MungoParkIII

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not Erotic

This story did nothing to turn me on .When I read a story from the erotic stories I like to at least get a hard on.This was way to short and not erotic at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

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Boring

SheerhoseSheerhoseover 16 years ago
THIS WAS STUPID

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Boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
try something else

If you're going to put like 100 stories up, at least try different things. Try talking to the listener directly. Try using more evocative language (to put it delicately - which you should not do.)

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