by MungoParkIII
sorry, but just didn't do it for me.... erotic it wasn't, and the reading of your story needs some work!
didn't even turn me on just a little. Also, if you stutter over a word, re-record so that it doesn't take away from the story. You tripped over more than a handful of words and this story is only 5 min long.
I read some of your stories and especially liked the 1992 Nissan Maxima one, you write quite well, but this somehow didn't do it for me in the least. I didn't get the point of it. :/