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WomanPariahWomanPariahabout 16 years ago
really rolls along, be bop bang!

I wish you had a title, though. I am dying to know what you would name this. Nonetheless, i love the "stage directions" of the drum and sax. The alliteration brings a melancholy i would not expect from so few words. Nicely done. OK: how about "Jazz exit"? No? "WanderBop" Naw, too sing songy. "Reed wanders the beat"? Thanks for the read.

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