All Comments on 'The Ex Ch. 02'

of stories of shit heads who can't get hard without force

Some people just like forced sex and just because this story is about that doesnt mean thats all that he likes/wants. If you wanted something else, I would say to search for specific terms or find another category.

You really need an editor dear. When you write, you tend to repeat yourself within a paragraph several times. Your ideas are really good though and I do enjoy the story for the most part.

Sorry, meant below me...

Writing in the present tense is poor because stories are about events that happened in the past. This is why even beginning authors should use past tense when they write. It also helps when the characters are more than plastic blow-up dolls, and when the plot makes a bit of sense. This isn't good fiction, erotic or otherwise.