All Comments on 'Niah Ch. 02'

My only quibble - I wanted a longer chapter :)<br><br>

You gave us a little more insight into the existing pack members, and now I am really anxious to hear Niah's story. It's sad that she lost one of her babies, and hasn't even had the chance to hold her son yet. I will be watching for your next update.

I liked the chapter even if was a bit short. I was sad when the little girl didn't make it. I hope Niah makes it though...seeing as she hadn't woken up yet. :/

I can't wait until the next chapter.

Your story has been mentioned in the Author's Hangout, "New Story Reviews"

Lots of promise I hope to read more.

I can't wait for your next chapter, I'm just dying to know about where this girl came from, and what happened to her...come on, I'm DYING of curiosity here...lol..but seriously, I hope you post another chapter here soon...

Please more why was she abused who is the pups father more please i really enjoyed this story

Regards AR

For those of you following this story I just want you to know I will continue on it I have hit a momentary speed bump and as soon as i can I will be continuing with this story. Thank you all so much for your votes and your comments. Like so many others its like candy to get them. I am very excited about this. Please hang in there there will be a new installment coming soon and hopefully it will be longer.

I have been patiently waiting and hoping for an update, and I'm glad to hear one is in the works. I don't mind (well, not too much anyway) waiting, as long as I know the story will be updated some time!

good set up but still waiting for the rest hope you haven't left us for good.

CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!

it is good keep going

can't wait to read on....hope you continue it soon. You laid out a great cast of characters with a groundwork for a great story for all of them. Great job!

Great start, keep writing!

I liked the story very much but it makes me frustrated that is has been more than 3 years since this chapter came...

Honestly, if a writer can´t deliver faster, I seriously think they should be removed from the stories site as it is seldom that the reader checks beforehand, if the story has been finished or just takes up time to read and then never coming to anything!

Jf you liked this..send feedback. Lets let the author know we'd like it to be finished and not be left wondering how it would have developed as a story.

It sucks when you see such a good start for a story and then look and see it was posted 3 years ago. I wish the author would pick it up again. It has alot of promise. At least let us know it isn't gonna be finished. I should check ahead of time from now on rather than be left hanging.

This story had great characters that could really have been developed. The author has talent. A shame they aren't finishing it.

WOW, cool start of a promising story. The end of each chapter leaves the reader eagerly awaiting the next installment into Niah's story. Looking forward to reading what happens next (does Niah get excepted into the new pack? does a pack fight determine her loyalties? does she become Rom's Alphess?) so many questions................wanna know, wanna know!

MOOOOOOREEEEEE

please finish this story

More chapters. More pages. And less wait time. Thank you.

I've been waiting forever for another chapter please write more faster. I know its hard but you are a very fantastic writer. The story is addictive...

More please