All Comments on 'Therapist Ch. 01'

by MungoParkIII

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WAY too short

This was WAY too short, no character development, nothing building up the mind control aspect, and the sex wasn't hot either. Read some of the other mind control stories before you try again.

DigitalCrossDigitalCross3 months ago

Generally, nobody gives their therapist the honorific of therapist. That distracted me more than it should have.

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