All Comments on '12/07 Spring Wind'

by wildsweetone

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Sounds like a chill wind blowing there in NZ late into the season.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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for what it is, it is nice, effective closer.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
Short and

to the point. It stirs up some vivid images.

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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I really like this one, wso. Love the image of black blossoms caught in her hair.

ElmerGlewElmerGlewover 16 years ago
Very nice.

The image of the wind causing the hair to "bloom" (how I read this) is neatly done. I don't understand the reasoning behind putting the date in the title.

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