by Anna_Malia75
Love it when the stories include humor....and this is very, very clever! Good job.
Nice mix of humor and fantasy! Very well written too! Can't wait to read more!
A nice blend of sensuality and humor. I hope to see more submissions from you.
Well done Anna. Well done, indeed. I really enjoyed the intense sexual chemistry between Samantha and Rachel. Keep the stories coming and I will be coming back for more.
You tricked me, Anna, naughty girl. That clever twist came just in the "nick" of time. I look forward to reading more from you.
It felt a bit unfinished to me, like Samantha and Rachel could have done so much more together and spent more time together pleasuring each other, it finished rather suddenly I thought sorry
That was a fucked up thing for Sam to do, but it was still hot. Wish there had been more between the two of them though.
Nice work for an early submission. I have been writing out here for quite a while and have my own "Christmas-Related" series [ two of 'em ] but I'd guide any reader to yours for a HoHoHo!
My one complaint: You need to tone down the cursing. It can get annoying.