All Comments on 'Out of the Claus-et'

by Anna_Malia75

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Filly GalFilly Galover 16 years ago
HOT!!

OMFG!! I wish you would write more often!!

FG

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fun

Great fantasy with funny twists. Love it.

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 16 years ago
festive fun

Good fun - shame it was too late for the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Clever

Love it when the stories include humor....and this is very, very clever! Good job.

mellowgyrlmellowgyrlover 16 years ago
Awesome

Nice mix of humor and fantasy! Very well written too! Can't wait to read more!

Bridget69Bridget69over 16 years ago
Ho! Ho! Ho!

A nice blend of sensuality and humor. I hope to see more submissions from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bravo

A wonderful change of pace. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

this is a very well written story

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well done.

Well done Anna. Well done, indeed. I really enjoyed the intense sexual chemistry between Samantha and Rachel. Keep the stories coming and I will be coming back for more.

tickledkittytickledkittyover 16 years ago
Very clever.

You tricked me, Anna, naughty girl. That clever twist came just in the "nick" of time. I look forward to reading more from you.

secretmesecretmeabout 16 years ago
I will never

Look at Mrs. Claus the same way again. LOL! Thanks for that!

Ellie3456Ellie3456about 16 years ago
Hmm

It felt a bit unfinished to me, like Samantha and Rachel could have done so much more together and spent more time together pleasuring each other, it finished rather suddenly I thought sorry

Trinique_FireTrinique_Fireabout 16 years ago
what???????

That was a fucked up thing for Sam to do, but it was still hot. Wish there had been more between the two of them though.

BrettJBrettJover 15 years ago
Pretty Good

Nice work for an early submission. I have been writing out here for quite a while and have my own "Christmas-Related" series [ two of 'em ] but I'd guide any reader to yours for a HoHoHo!

sassyGirl1234sassyGirl1234over 15 years ago
Grat

vary nice dont stop it was grat you shoud writ more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not bad.

My one complaint: You need to tone down the cursing. It can get annoying.

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