All Comments on 'MMF - The Hotel'

Two great stories - please send more!!

It's Bombay Sapphire smart ass!

someone gets upset over the name of a drink. For those not in the know! Names of most drinks are localized, with different names and sometimes mixes. For instance a drink my loved in Canada, the Bloody Ceasar some years ago is still virtually unheard of here in the states. Who knows, Blue Sapphire, Bombay Sapphire, maybe the same thing maybe not. Sorta like getting upset over the use of the terms, ass and arse. Get the bloody 'ell ova it mate!

First, point of correction for previous comment: Blue Sapphire is the correct name and the brand is Bombay. If you are going to post snarky comments, get the facts right.

As fo the story, I found it to be nicely done. The anal scene seems a bit rushed, but overall this story has a nice mix of background details and sex scenes. I would consider this an above-par showing, and the author should definitely keep writing tales for us.

Good god, I get so annoyed at those who think it is fashionable to trash someone else's work. Whatta a buncha "num-nuts!!" Go off somewhere and piss up a rope, please. and leave these fledgling writer alone. Who cares about the drink. I thought it was a very nice seduction story and I think that was what the writer had in mind. It came across well and I enjoyed it without reading anyone's drool about a minor detail. I hope to read more from this author. I think it was well written was done with enough splash to make it interesting and provocative. I'm not looking for a literary giant in Literotica, just someone who has a good story to share. In this case, the writer accomplished it!! Thank you, mvm69 ... nice job!

PS If you are going to trash someone's work, at least have the balls to sign your worthless name to it!

loved it :) more more more!!

Story is o.k. I knew a lady called Patricia, she was mid 50s, short, slightly plump, blonde. I was 12 years younger than her. I knew her through a sporting organization. She rang me and asked me over to her new flat. We had a few drinks and she said I need to ask you to do me a favor, we have known each other for quite a long time. Yeh, well, what is it. I am getting old, yeh, we all are, quiet and listen, I need you to organize 4 or 5 guys for a party night here and lets see what develops. What do you mean, well, about your age or younger, I had been married for too long, should have left Mr Boring ages ago. I don't care if they are married or single, I want to see if , well what happens. I asked are you sure, she looked at me and said I'm sure. I thought about it, then said I will see. I left, I rang her next morning, after the drink had worn off, still keen, yes, I want to see. I managed to get 4 guys I knew. I arranged a time. I explained to each that I think she wants a gang bang but lets see. I arrived early, she answered the door, no top, such a short skirt, just covered her bottom,no panties, stay up stockings,. Patricia, wow, she shut the door and turned, you like, sure, whats not to like. she came over and put her arms around me, thankyou, are you going to be part of the party, she looked at me, I would like that very much. Well, I wasn't but wow, her hand on my growing cock. Talk, what are you prepared to do, I need to know have you thought, yes, everything except in my bottom, really, jokingly I said well that would have been my choice, my finger tracing her plump rear end. She said well, if all goes o.k. I will save it for you. The guys arrived within 15 minutes of each other, I sat them down.On a table were condoms. Oral o.k without, fucking must have one on. No anal, anything else goes. I stood up, clothes off, they stripped,Patricia walked out,she smiled, walked up to one of the guys and began sucking him, just like that, one guy stood up, she was kneeling sucking, he put on a condom, knelt behind her, fingering her pussy, then pushed his cock into her, fucking her with long slow strokes. That's the way it went all night, her legs open on the lounge, over the edge of the lounge, guys shooting in her mouth and pussy. I mounted her and fucked her pussy, it was very easy to slide into, I pulled out, took the condom off and moved to her mouth, I grabbed her head and fucked her mouth as a guy lay down under her and pushed his cock into her, I saw a guy get behind her, hey no anal, he said no im going to do her pussy as well and I watched as she took 2 cocks in her pussy, her face grimacing at first but then as they rode her, she kept yelling, oh god, im cumming and she did, and kept cumming so I pushed my cock back into her mouth and she sucked the cum from me. After about 4 hours every one was just about done, some showered before leaving, others just left. She came to me, well, it was great, I had 2 in me at once, oh how that felt. She was stroking my cock, come on, she grabbed my hand, led me into the bedroom, lay down, she stroked my cock, then sucked me, I grabbed her, pulling her pussy over my mouth, licking her, she squirmed, orgasming hard, oh fuck me. I rolled her over, reached for a condom, no, just fuck me, I slid easily into her, a very wet bottomless pit, she lifted her legs, do what you said,what, you know in my bottom, I pulled back, lifted her legs and positioned my cock but it would not go in. Top drawer, lube, careful, I got the lube, spread some on my finger, rimming and pushing it inside. Then 2 big blobs on my

cock, I still couldn't get in. I lay on my back, sit on it, she said I don't know, I felt her hold me and push down, she slowly opened and the head of my cock entered. Oh, shit, augh, , I rolled her back over, still in her and slowly, gently eased into her. I moved over her, looking at her, gently moving my cock, until I was fucking her absolutely tight arse. I moved back, my finger rubbing her clit, I started to pulse, I heard her, how big, so big, then my cum shot into her as I massaged her clit as she bucked and orgasmed with my cock deep in her bottom. She told me later she had done anal only twice before but never like that. I now take her to a swingers club. I introduced her to woman to woman sex. I must say she is an absolute slut.