All Comments on 'Centaur's Reluctant Mate Ch. 03'

by AMY_Monaco

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice update

I like how you are expanding your story line, adding a bit of background for Cullem, the slavers, etc.

sugarfairy1137sugarfairy1137over 16 years ago
Nice

Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another great chapter!

You have the basis for a very good story. With your continued character development and descriptive style, this story will only get better :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
MORE!

I really like this world you are creating. I want to hear more. Although I hate the way Rose has been kidnapped I can't wait to see how he shows his displeasure.

Plus, is there more to Callum's story then what he said? that is something else I can't wait to read more about.

Thanks for writing!

trippychicktrippychickover 16 years ago
nice!

I am lovin this so far:) I cant wait to read more:)

starry_nightstarry_nightabout 16 years ago
So enjoying this story!

I like the part where Thayer lists his reasons for adoring Rose. It's great how protective he is of her and how Thayer's brothers call her "sister" like she is part of the family. <P> I'm glad Callum found her before the slavers did. Poor Callum, that's terrible what happened to him. Hope he finds happiness and love someday. I agree...great job on developing the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm off to read your other story. Thanks for updating two stories at a time! You rock!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wonderful

Do post the next chapter soon. Can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More please

I am loveing this story more please can't wait to read it I keep checking back here for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
amazing!

can't wait for more! <33

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lack of logic here...

Enjoyed reading this well-written tale, but:

"every female you saw is given the freedom to leave. We do not force them to live here"

does not seem to apply, does it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wondeful....

I think that "Allowed to leave if not happy" thing is more for after the ceremony or or once they have had some time to adjust. No one would respond well to being kidnapped at first. I am loving this story and cannot wait to read all the rest that have popped up. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
thanks

your stories are very good wish you contnued writing.

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004over 9 years ago
Please give us more!

Can't wait for the next chpt. ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You Did Not Have My Permission

I came here for sexy centaur fun. I did not sign up for this feels trip! This is good writing. So sorry for Callum! :'(

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