All Comments on 'All the World is a Stage'

Again a great idea poorly developed.

That was both an unusually good and original story with a little light hearted, depreciating sense of humor for this section of Literotica called "Loving Wives".

The usual readers and many of Loving Wives’ authors take their stories and this section ‘oh so seriously’.

Well done don't ever lose your sense of humor and irreverence it is such a delightful and refreshing change from the usual angst ridden stories and their philosophical and analytical commentators.

Good luck with your future writing, I will certainly be following your work with interest.

great story, a new theme well developed. Thank you for the pleasure.

SWIVER

I hate cheating! But then again...this is not really cheating at all is it? This is just serious love playing...

However, I am not certain so I rated it 5*****.

another inane comment - at least no "I hate police" rants though

another inane comment - at least no "I hate police" rants though

But, it was clever, sexy and well-written. Mind games at the highest level.

'O, what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive.'

Then come tears and heart break. TK

Does John know that Marsha is really fucking guys on the side? It kind of sounds like the joke is on him. Great twist. A 5 Star Rating.