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All Comments on 'Spring Break Fantasies'

by ILmommy2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too short

A good start, but too short. Very much "WHAM-BAM-thank you, ma'am." Add more detail about what the characters do and feel, especially when you get to the naughty bits.

BTW, UNCG alum.

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