by ILmommy2
The story had lots of potential, but went WAY too quickly into the action. Not beleivable at all.
I liked the story as I am a teacher. I have had a fantasay or two about seducing a parent or a young teacher. I have to agree with the comment that you went to fast with the action. Personally, I do not like drawn out stories but I do like to enjoy the ride. Slow down a little bit.