All Comments on 'Reluctantly Seduced'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

With a divorce rate as high as it is this is a good start for another.Your just roomates now anyway.Guys at work will be next than just guys.Because someone turns the wife on is a lousey reason too give up on your vowes.Oh well at least you got laid too and wern't just watching or doing threesome.Good Luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sigh

These tired little 'clueless husband' stories irritate me. At least it was short.

roadbirdroadbirdover 16 years ago
boring

i believe this was a set up n had happened before with them ...i think he needs to catch up as he started out behind to begin with ...so next time find another woman n fuck her in front of the wife n then tell her she can also do her hubhy...ooops hes not here now well ill continue n ill introduce you to him tomorrow ...lol n ill sam=ple little suzi here again myself

oh lol this was because what you did with marge n mike i liked so i felt if i could do your friends you can now do mine '''oh i wonder think mike n marge will want to trade here also

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
in reality

This piece is ok, but the tension that is built in the beginning leaving the husband's decisions in doubt are too easily allowed to slip away with his willingness to be used as a pawn. I presume that some readers enjoy "pawn-husband" or "wimp-husband" stories, and that's ok, but if that is the desired genre, at least build in some drama in the husband's mind as he is used. The cluelessness is what really drains the tension too fast.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
poor ending

it is clear that more had been going on before. The 3 came indeed with a plan. If it was clear to him more or less from the beginning, he could have told them to leave after he fucker the neigbour and told them to take his wife with them. That should wake her up, at least if she cared. poor story with poor ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh Well...

It would have been nice if Betty had talked it over with John before she decided to become a slut...

hansbwlhansbwlover 16 years ago
If my wife

had pulled something like this on me, without prior discussion, I would have walked out and never looked back.

katibkatibover 16 years ago
What is the point...?

Is there no more to this than mere description? No emotion? No anger or remorse?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting--The teaser sub-title gave the stories

plot but most of the idiot commenters below read it anyway-Then say they objected to it for some reason

Joyce19063Joyce19063over 16 years ago
I love the holier than thou attitude of some who

read this stuff then get all moralistic

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your lucky

this is a story asshole, I wonder how it is to have no balls for the rest of your life

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Badly Conceived, Poorly Developed...

...and written as if the "writer" was a third grader. There's no emotion in the story, the dialogue is infantile, the grammar and punctuation is sadly lacking. In short, there's nothing at all to recommend it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I can see the train coming, I am just to dumb to

move out of the way. At least he got to screw the neighbor. Next he needs to tell the guy the next time he comes on the property you will assume he is trespassing and will call the police or protect your properrty. Then tell the slut you are married to who planned to fuck around with or without your permission you are divorcing her and since she was the one violating the marriage vows you want her out of the house with all she can carry in the next five minutes, after that her lawyer can arrange with your lawyer how to obtain anything else she needs. If she raises hell tell her she can have half of everything, go get your power saw and start cutting everything in half for her. When I got my divorce years ago my wife started I want this and that and everything, I told her fine I will get the chainsaw and get you half of everything, she knew me well enough to stop the shit and start talking straight. In this story you painted a guy being used by three other people. I would suggest you get STD and AIDS testing immediately no telling what your wife and the other wife have infected you with. For those of you berating people who read stories they might be interested in and find the stories are not up to par and write critiques. You folks are worst than censors you are acting as Gods sending out your edicts on what others should and should not like. Get a life and grow up, I served my country so we could all have free speech, not just what others want to hear or what is politically correct at the moment. RB

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
its funny how some men like other men to fuck

their wife and make fun at others who don't get it.this was bullshit and disrespectful of his wife.she should have ask her husband before this crap came down.the louieville slugger side their heads would've being perfect.i respect others wives.whatever i read i'm not an animal.

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 16 years ago
Even the title lied

The grammar, story line and lack of an emotional content made this a poor story, for me. The word reluctantly in the title was also a sham. All through the story he gives clues that he knows what's going on... and he goes along.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Only 'reluctance' is Hubby's

But Hubby is not terribly reluctant, just a bit clueless. There is virtually no tension (or drama) in the story because the Neighbors are established swingers and seducers of novice couples. Sweetie goes along easily, and in the face of a three to nothing vote (with one abstention) takes the remaining slut! Welcome to the swinging world. At least no one's feelings were hurt!

Unrealistic, but formula intro to partner-sharing! Hope Sweetie doesn't simper later about being 'led astray!'

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What They Had Discovered?

Was ...that a divorce or two was imminent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Pushing someone into a situation like that is a good way to get someone hurt. Worked out okay in this story but I could see how it might not work out well, resulting in a possible physical confrontation, maybe worse, and possible divorce. I know I wouldn’t want to get blindsided into something like this. And my temper is such that blindsiding me into anything is a dangerous proposition for everyone involved. I’m just saying.

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

Dicks and whores, nasty combination, silly story.

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