All Comments on 'Elysium Ch. 04'

I've been waiting forever for this ending to this chapter. I hope you don't take this long to write the next one. I love it and can't wait to see what happen next.

Divinedidi, This storyline is great, please, please don't take so long to continue the story. I would love to see what Abi ultimately does with the two men in her life. Will it be Alex or will she discover that she really does have feeling of romantic love for Doug.

This is a great story, with a great host of characters. I sincerely hope you carry on this story, but please don't let Abi get with Doug, it sounds as if he needs a good slap to wake him up to reality.

P.S, I read your biography, you said you did'nt have the self confidence to write full-time, I hope you can change your mind as your writing beautiful and full of intelligence. Good luck to you and your future stories.

This is a great story, with a great host of characters. I sincerely hope you carry on this story, but please don't let Abi get with Doug, it sounds as if he needs a good slap to wake him up to reality.

P.S, I read your biography, you said you did'nt have the self confidence to write full-time, I hope you can change your mind as your writing beautiful and full of intelligence. Good luck to you and your future stories.

I loved your story--would love to read another chapter! I see chapter 4 was written a year ago... just sending some encouragement your way so that you know that people out there are still interested in what happens next. :)

That was an awesome update. More please more! What happened it seems as though this story just stopped please don't leave us hanging. They have finally gone off together without prying eyes and serious attitudes. I so have to see how this ends. Thanks!

SO ARE YOU EVER GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY!

So I shall beg PlEASE FINISH THIS ABSOLUTLY WONDERFUL STORY!

UPDATE!!!!!!F

Romance, indeed. For me, there is no need for a chapter five, although I would be happy to read it, should it ever appear.

Abi's family needs to stop trying to pimp her out to Doug and take care of themselves. I don't like Doug at all especially with him thinking about hitting her. Please update!

Just in case you happen to log in to Literotica, hope it's still not too late to request you to continue with this lovely romance. Abi is somewhat refreshing and we readers would indeed love to hear her story.

Please Continue The Story!!!!

thank goodness she moved out--too bad her family chose to stay with selfish, crazy Doug, but they're his problem, now.