All Comments on 'The Show Must Go On'

Nice twist for cautious Kate - who pulled off both the trick and her knickers to great effect. Given how much turned on Ed was by her public nudity, are we likely to find more occasions when the "inner" Kate has to put in an appearance? Certainly hope so.

Story takes too long to get nowhere.

Strange how most negative comments are anonymous. But I thought it was brilliant - nice..er..climax! More please!

I liked the suspense in this story - the way (although there is an erotic tension because we know it's a Literotica story) nothing appears likely to happen until suddenly it does.

Good to see the empowerment of Kate by her sexuality. Hope there's more to come!

magic!

I agree with some of the positive comments below. It worked for me!

Can we get some more? Would like to know if "Kate" loosened up even more.

Your story was fast paced and yet had just enough info to understand what was going on. It was exciting and fun. I loved it and hope you write more!