All Comments on 'Backstage with Taylor Swift'

by rpwilbur

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Hobbitman457Hobbitman457almost 16 years ago
Story

It's not a bad story, but you failed to make several connections both with your reader and between the main characters. Plus, you just rushed into the intimacy, with them just meeting. You are a good writer, I will award you that, and you have some good ideas, but you just need to bridge them together. First of all, he walked in on her masturbating and she just decided 'Hey, what the hell? Might as well.'? You do need to improve on that. Thats the biggest connection you failed to miss, the one I hope you improve on! Otherwise, good story. 50%

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Right....

Ok I know something aint right if I of all people am weirded out by this. Where to even start, 1st off why would she even date a nobody--much less loser virginity to someone she doesn't even know? Security just let's some dude In past them w/a "press pass", yet u say u "won a contest" which is it? Taylor swift Sux dont get me wrong...we'd lOve to see her try to have to deal with problems HALF as big as many minorities or lower income people do. It's just funny, not sexy. Her "woman juices" hahah what r u a 14 yr old kid? Cum, hate this word but hell call it Jizz over woman juices hahah. It makes u sound like you've never been w/a girl EVER...which sadly is probably the case if u devote time 2 endeavor's like this. Maybe u should just get a job or REAL girl, in the REAL world--oh! And funniest part of all--8 inch cock huh? So Ur able to make multi-million $ celebrities orgasm with a dick approx. Half again as big as the normal adult white male? How convenient for u, NOT to be able to prove it in any way. Ok if we're playing that game I made Megan Goode, Halle berry, and Natalie portman go wild with my 7 1/2 foot cock. That's how u lie buddy. Honestly tho...it scares me to imagine some old pervert writing intimate stories about someone they neither know, nor will ever meet u. Gee what stud, Was funny tho...bc most guys and EVERY girl knows u have no game and get no real pussy if u had to go to these lengths for sexual gratification. Maybe u should devote all that time to planting your real "seed" as u so eloquently put it. After you and taylor's exploits u can go have lunch with bill gates, use ur wings to fly to brazil, and then kill some pigs that have been flying around above some unicorns. Lol, get your REAL life game up

TheBigLove126TheBigLove126over 12 years ago
@ Anonymous commenter

This is for the commenter who whined about the story being fictional.

First off, nice spelling & grammar.

Second, the story is rpwilbur's. If he wants to write a fictional story like this, it's THEIR choice and THEIR story. If you don't like these kind of stories, than don't read them. Here's a secret about celebrity erotica...(whispers) it's fictional. If he wants to write about a character walking in and Taylor Swift immediately wants to fuck him than that's perfectly fine because it's THEIR story. If you want a more "realistic" story than write one yourself. I bet you would hate all of my stories too because I write primarily celebrity stories

This is for rpwilbur: I loved every part of this story, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Holy shit

I want to be that man in the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Lovely

A very beautiful and sexy story. I took the perverted liberty, while reading it, of imagining that Taylor was actually 17, not 18, when the events in this story took place. The thought her ejaculating her pussy juice while having her first ever sex encounter with a fan is absurdly delicious and hot.

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