All Comments on 'Strip Club Waitress'

Well wrten hot story. Reads like a true story. Have often wondered why women love to share men with their friends. Never questioned. Just enjoyed.

My comment is.....great story hubby but being there seemed alot more fun. Everyone reading this....it's all true and was alot of fun!! Glad to see the hubby can put it in words!!!!

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This is the first of your submissions I've read. I will probably continue to read them in order, as long as they don't disappoint too badly.

This is a good story, believable, with characters it's easy to like. But you need to proofread your writing - or get a decent editor - to avoid careless errors, e.g., "my naked wife standing there, admiring my work. Amy jumped on the bed and crawled over to me, watching as her boyfriend"... really? In one sentence they're married, in the next they're not? That was a quickie divorce.

Gary13

wife

It's strange now people perceive sex and stories so differently l read another by this author rated just over 3*_and came before it finished, I found it very sexy and erotic and gave it 5*. This was rated approx four and a half stars and I gave it 3 nearly two. It didn't do anything for me, no stirrings at all down below, no flow, no eroticism, it's fantasy I hate rubbers anytime so I certainly don't want to read about them in a fantasy story. Please don't get me wrong I totally believe in safe protected sex,