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Strip Club Waitress

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by Anonymous

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by oldwino01/08/08

Great Hot Story

Well wrten hot story. Reads like a true story. Have often wondered why women love to share men with their friends. Never questioned. Just enjoyed.

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by Anonymous01/13/08

I AM Amy

My comment is.....great story hubby but being there seemed alot more fun. Everyone reading this....it's all true and was alot of fun!! Glad to see the hubby can put it in words!!!!

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by Anonymous05/28/09

Why are you married?

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by Gary1302/25/14

Five stars BUT...

This is the first of your submissions I've read. I will probably continue to read them in order, as long as they don't disappoint too badly.

This is a good story, believable, with characters it's easy to like. But you need to proofread your writing - or get a decent editor - to avoid careless errors, e.g., "my naked wife standing there, admiring my work. Amy jumped on the bed and crawled over to me, watching as her boyfriend"... really? In one sentence they're married, in the next they're not? That was a quickie divorce.

Gary13

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