All Comments on 'Wrong Side of the Bed'

by JosephMama

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Orion623Orion623over 16 years ago
Imaginative

Nicely written. Probably it would make for better sex if we could experience the actual feelings of the opposite sex. A longer story might have included the husband going off to the wife's job, getting hit on by all her fellow workers, and finding out that she is the office pincushion.

LEATBTLEATBTover 16 years ago
Brilliant

and original, I would love to this situation repeated and devolped over 24 hours or so!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I agree this was very nice, but should have gone on longer for each.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad

Great premise, and a nice start, but WAY too short. Need to learn how to develop a story more and explore the possibilities more. Not just "Oh wow, that's hot, let's fuck."

bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
Incredible Story

This story reminds me of the Star Trek series where theCapt.Kirk and a woman doctor had switched bodies your story was so well written i hope you continue to see how they get through the transformation or if they decide to change back he can go into the womens bathroom and see them and flirt with them as he is inside a womans body.lol

Pat

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice one! Good follow-thru.

Nice plot and story line. I enjoyed it. Good to see us from our partner's perspective.

PW

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 16 years ago
Missed opportunity

This is an interesting theme - and for those who like their stories a bit more complicated go to Ann Douglas' "Through the Looking Glass Darkly"

It is longer and considerably darker, with a great twist at the end. It is the best body-switching story I've read EVER, ANYWHERE

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Who will you wake up tomorrow?

Body switching never turned me on but deserves thumbs up for originality (at least here).

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
lots of potential

develop it. what happens next? he goes to her work and the guys hit on her. normally, he'd be pissed but his new body likes it. he can't help it....the guy part of him likes the attention and wants to tease her coworkers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Too Damn Short

I was just starting to feel aroused when... opps it finished. Please re-write it to include all new sexual situations for both!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Loved it wish it would happen to me

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Enjoyed it

Thanks for the offering. Very unique.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very nice

Really enjoyed your story, a little anticlimactic but still very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Hot!!

Wow! Very sexy!! Every married couples dream............very exciting fantasy!! Thx

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 3 years ago
Way Too Short

Given this situation, doing a flash, one episode tale is either lazy or remarkably non-creative! Each partner can finally be totally open about the weirdest fantasies they would normally be afraid to admit to even mentioning! It will make ‘her’ being credible in a law office difficult, however. Maybe it is only an nighttime thing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's a pity that he couldn't stay in his wife's body for at least a couple of days. He could go to work instead of her and find out which of her male colleagues is too friendly with her. Which of the employees immediately grabs her ass instead of greeting her, and which of the bosses immediately unzips his fly, entering her office.

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