All Comments on 'Richard'

by Weirdwriter

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
short and good but.........

you have the capacity to do better. Elaborate more, create the scene and setting and give the reader at least fifteen minutes or more of reading.

Satyr040Satyr040about 16 years ago
Very nice

Great start, now for a longer chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Perfect Relationship

Wow! Loved your story...it would be a perfect relationship to have with a son...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
my stepdad

i was a pre teen when my stepdad became my new dad and he started me in the life of perverted sex, he even show me what a gloryholes was for and he love watching me suck and fuck in a public restrooms with others, this was back in the 60s

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 8 years ago
your a good dad

great that you encourage the young man to embrace his sexuality.

InlovewithjustinInlovewithjustinover 8 years ago
Incredible

I came all over my own panty clad thighs, I write as well, would love to hear your input on my writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
every family needs a cocksucking faggot

especially a kid who takes it up the ass as well--so that the big horny guys of the family, his dad, brothers, uncles, and male cousins, can blow their heavy loaded balls in sweet satisfaction

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