by bruce49
Well told; just like I imagine I'll be writing someday ~ I hope a similar story. I like your honesty.
I get tired of so many stories where the girl "just turned 18" -- I enjoy sexy mature lovin' stories done right. And I love 69!
Nice story, nice writing style, but it wasn't hot. It wasn't sexy. It wasn't erotic. Maybe Reader's Digest would be a better place for this one.
How can anyone say that this tale is not erotic? I'm an octogenarian and it still got my dick up.
Very well told, grammar and sentence structure made it a very nice read.
This story closely parallels the relationship I currently have with a friend. I wish my experience with her will progress as far as in this story, or farther.
Fulfillment of a fantasy Bruce. Great story. Love my wife dearly, but have a couple of lady friends like Sue that I'd like to play cribbage with too for a weekend!! Great story - simple yet meaniingful ! Thanks.