All Comments on 'The Ultimatum'

very hot!

This should have been in Non-Consent, as she is definitely not consenting, not before and not after.

Pope- And there was a bit of inner conflict with placing it there, but considering that I know the whole story- not just what's on paper- I thought this was more appropriate. Especially when the rest of them, if people enjoy this one enough, will be in the interracial category. My mistake if it takes away from the story. This is my first time submitting a story. So, I'll be a bit wiser about it now. Thanks.

Will you continue with their story?

i'm glad you did put it in interracial because it's a great story that i would have missed out on if it was in non-consent.

This was awesome and it is in the perfect category because you can tell that there will be more to the story. Please don't make us wait too long!

Thanks for your support, people.

The sequel is going through the final touches and should be submitted within the next week or so. It will be titled differently so keep your eyes peeled.:)

I have to say I was hooked from the first paragragh! I cannot wait to see what you'll next! Congratulations!

Where's that sequel!

it's been over a month!

A great story. When is the sequel coming?

LOVE IT.. now were is the rest.. ????

I just now became aware of this story. It's very good, and I wonder why the sequel was apparently never submitted. I'm sure it would have been good, because the idea of a love story starting this way was a good one.

I don't understand the complaint about the category, as the girl clearly gave her consent, although a bit reluctantly.

Looking forward to the sequel.

im ready for you to continue this

I'm ready for the next installment.

This was great!

and when is the next one?

I loved the way you've set the story up and this hot. Please continue =)

Why did he not just try asking her out after the semester was over with? I like the devious way he plotted and planned to get her, but I feel that he should have been honest with her from the beginning-it almost started off as rape.

This is amazing. I hope you keep writing :)

I would live to see more of this story unfold. It would be interesting to see how the characters develop their " relationship" .

Its so good. You should turn it into a full lenth story. Id love to see how the story unfolds.

I hope she went to the police and turned him in for rape

Would love to read of how he got to her again

loved this so much it got me hot

That really was rape. She could have turned him in. Was he too arrogant to risk rejection & risked his freedom instead?

I hope you're still writing as this was a great and very interesting start! :)

This would have been so much better if she at some point gave a verbal agreement that sex with him was what she wanted. I'm sorry, it took the appeal out of the story for me with him just forcing himself on her. Perhaps if I had known this would be a non-consent/rape story (even if it was only an author's note in the beginning), I would have been better prepared to read it!

Great combination of characters and story set-up.

Nice attention to detail.

Granted, I don't mind a non-consent story that becomes a hot consent during the act of sex. But I think this story needs a sequel with the professor convincing her once again. But this time, she's not so pissed for the outcome. Instead, she finds herself morally against it but physically loving it.