All Comments on 'Cabin'

sweet, tender, erotic, arousing...what more could you want? pictures, maybe, but the pictures it evoked in my head will do very nicely for now! thanks.

Simple story line, honest characters, erotic events. I really enjoyed this and will look for more from you.

Dynamic writing!

Well written simple story that held such tenderness, with a touch of 'first time' wonder about it. Very enjoyable!

Never read a piece of erotic literature with an orthodox Jewish twist. Very well written - clean style, actually 'glatt kosher.'

But it is also very good,Jewish women well no that would be telling.A hetero male

I will tell you what I want,another chapter of this lovely story.

I agree, chapter 2 is a must...

i have to say, that was very skilled and erotic writing, also VERY jewish.

I don't usually rate stories, but this one was so skillfully written and beautiful that I wanted to request another chapter.

Thank you for this beautiful story

Wonderfully sensuous and erotic. Thank you Charlotte.

Ohhh Charlotte - This Is Such A Sexy Story Of

Young Innocence. It's So Nice That The Weekend

Was Girls only, And That They Both Agreed To Be"CUM"

Friends Who Kissed !

A bit of a slow start, but the affection between the two girls was very well written. Overall, very lovely, very erotic.

Lovely little bite sized story, thanks for putting it up!

I enjoyed the intimacy and the innocent nature of the women getting to know each other. Thank you for sharing.

Good writing, especially the captivating dialog.

Thank you. A touching, romantic first time. Made me jealous, and wish I'd been more open with myself at a younger age.

Well done. Beautifully written, and erotic.

Hugs.

BiGrrl

This was wonderful.

Lovely and so very sweet.

Charlotte! the story was awesome dear! lovely just like yourself!:) thank you for this great story! I think it's the first story that I almost cried with it at first and at the had an orgasm with that!

thank you again:)

not a bad short story, wish it was a little longer but still a good story

Lovely story, your the only writer whose stories make me want to be one of the characters. Your stories have so much feeling about them, never lustful, but full of eroticism, that has me aroused from the very beginning.

It reminded me of being at our cabin with my cousin when I was younger. I don't really have those fantasies anymore, I guess it was just hormones. But, embarrassingly, I had such a crush on her. She didn't know it, and it never went anywhere. But yes, this totally brought me back to that time.

Beautiful! Erotic. A wonderful piece of fiction so very well written. And terribly arousing. I could so picture myself in that tentative sensual place.

Cant wait to read more. Thank you Charlotte.

This story had me entranced. The scenic setting, the weaving-in of Jewish culture (especially the impact of the Yiddisher Mama's phone call), combine to create a rich context for the hesitant progression of the two women exploring and gradually finding their way to each other.

This is the first of your stories that I've read - I look forward to reading more

Not this girl. Through the simple and isolated medium of "Cabin," Charlotte takes her readers into gentle but sturdy woman-to-woman affection. Her story is worthy of the few minutes it will take to inhale its softness. Nellskitchen

Very sensual, gentle, lovely exploration of "what if?'

Nice story but too short. Needs another chapter.

So loved your sweet and erotic story...makes me want to know Charlotte so much better...kisses, your Peach

Mmmmmmmmm very sexy….so sweet…so tender…love it

wonderful story xx

I love how your write....so tenderly and sensually.... I love the build up and then the sweetness with which they engaged.... you are so much like yourself.....lol..... i love knowing the author and seeing you in your own character

Charlotte, I just love how you write, your words are so beautiful, the sensuality just comes off the page as you read the story and I find myself getting lost in it. I look so forward to reading your other stories, as a first story to be introduced to your writing I think this recommendation was the perfect start

I hope "maybe later" becomes our reality as I would love to experience something even remotely like this would be way more than i have ever experienced. I want to be Shira. Thank you for sharing this one with me.

Pretty good story, and told as if it really happened. I gave this one a 5 because of the description of her pussy taste changing (very believable) and there IS PUSSY HAIR (An absolute must in stories like this one). "I kissed my way up the inner thigh, started to stroke her curly pubes. I combed her hairs softly with my fingertips, leaned in to kiss her lips."

This was so sweet and gentle; I want to know more about these girls and their lives together.

I love how you write Charlotte! This is true erotica, or meant for a woman to read! I love it so much!