All Comments on 'Enchanted Twelve: Quinn Ch. 02'

of unrequited love and opportunities lost. I'm looking forward to the conclusion to this one! And thanks for giving my characters a cameo part. You rawk pretty witch!

Your stories of Quinn are simply magical. As I read them, I am drawn in to the world you've created. And then, all too soon, it's over. You do have a bit of magic!

I suggest you take a second look at where this chain seems to be headed if you want to keep up. You butchered Quinn and left her for dead. Try a new line story that is not so bad for such a chain as this.

It followed perfectly from your first story and gave a pleasant change of pace from many of the highly sexual stories in the chain. A very fairy tale story, I can't wait to see how it all works out.

I love the innocence of Quinn. I quote my first comment on Quinn's first chapter...

What a great addition! I really liked this chapter and the sense of young love you're portraying. Thanks for hopping on board and taking a ride on this enchanted roller coaster ride. ~ Red.

My words still hold with this chapter.

Quinn is the fifth twin, aged 22. She is sweet, considerate, kind and very much struggling with the desire to be with someone that she knows she shouldn't be with. Young love. First love. You've portrayed the romance wonderfully and I continue to feel the desire growing between this couple.

I SUPPORT everything you have done for this chain. I look forward to seeing what becomes of Quinn and Jerome. I also encourage you to keep taking this couple wherever your muse leads you. It is on a path that I find enchanting.

You have done an OUTSTANDING job and though we can not please everyone, we have pleased many. Remember that as you write the rest of this Princess's story.