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Persuading Shy Mom to Pose

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/01/10

dont normaly write on here but...

wow i just had to. amazing story.i would have liked to see more pussy action. an i'd love to see her made pregnant. then some titty milk shots. well done

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by Anonymous11/30/10

i would like to get fucked like mom

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by Anonymous12/19/10

PERFECT

Ignore these other idiots - your story is PERFECT! HOT action, gets right to the anal which is SO naughty...I keep cumming back to your story over and over to get my rocks off!

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by RomanMichael12/21/10

Erotic read

Great Story.
I like the mom/son stories alot, I think all young boys had a thing for Mom growing up.
I love the use of the pussy, although I do tend do get a little bored with the anal stuff!

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by Teddyrandal01/06/11

Good story

Good story keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous01/17/11

Enjoyed the story

I really enjoyed the story and the entire premise of it. Got me very aroused imagining my mother and I doing the same things.

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by Anonymous04/03/11

This was really wonderful story...I actually imagined my 39 year old mom while reading the story...Keep up such nice uploads....

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by autoplot04/27/11

I really enjoyed the pace of this story -- my only criticism would be that the overuse of "ehhh" and *Flash* was distracting and unnecessary -- it detracted from the story rather than adding to it. Overall, though, very fun story. I loved the charade. "It's just for pretend!" Who are they fooling?

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by Anonymous05/09/11

Great!

nice story man.. i love the flow of the story..
keep it up

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by blueyedbob05/28/11

love good incest stories

however, this was not one of them,,,started out well but then got very juvenile and demeaning to the woman,,and made her look ridiculously stupid! the story just lost all credibility and out of touch with reality,,,i would expect more adult literacy from literotica,,,i only finished it because it was hilariously silly! grow up!

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by Anonymous05/30/11

blueyedbob

Until you submit a story yourself, you should keep your criticism of others up your own ass. We all appreciate criticism, but only from a valid source. Post a story, and then we can all judge how credentialed you are to rubbish other's efforts.

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by Anonymous06/25/11

What a turn on !!!!

Now the hero has the photos he blackmail his mum to go further down the road to perversion. She seems to have potential to be taken further.Just like the story does

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by juci_luci08/05/11

naughty son!

wow I loved chapter 1!! very naughty as u warned but like I said the naughtier the better!! juci!! (who is now extremely juci!!)

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by Anonymous11/07/11

been there

I took pics of my mom one night. I did fuck her and she did suck me. She came in the next day and told me to never get my camera out with her there. I never had another time with her

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by Anonymous12/08/11

??

Wat the fuck is "Arse"????

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by Anonymous12/15/11

arse is british

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by Anonymous12/23/11

TOO GOOOOD

SO GOOD I AM HAVIN A WANK JUST READING IT
FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous12/29/11

friendly son

hot story of how a son tricks mom into as fucking - she really wanted it.

had a friend who would take hidden photos of his mother and step dad fucking would show them to me. i thought that was hot but this story is really good and it brought back that memory of my college friend

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by Anonymous03/10/12

Wow!!! thats Good!!!!

Thanks for the story!!!!! I HAD A GREAT TIME READING!!!

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by Anonymous04/16/12

Wow....

This is the hottest story on this site, def...
Keep up the good work man...

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by Anonymous04/21/12

shoguy rules this site

you should all read the story Sinful High Class Mom Ch. 02 by shoguy...omg talk about hot!!! son with huge cock and real hot mom...this shoguy writer is the best on ths site!

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by Anonymous05/11/12

Great stroke story

The progression from reluctance to wanton slut is fantastic. Not just tease without rewards like other "writers" try. Keep on writing these great stuff. Thanks.

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by Anonymous05/25/12

Made me soooo wet...

More stories please...this is the best story on the site and the hottest in this series...why did u stop writing?

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by Anonymous06/06/12

hotttt!!

just couldn't stop shagging while reading this story... thanks for a really hot story!!!

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by oldtwit06/14/12

Oh another

Oh another chapter, what a good group this lot are.

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by Dago6706/21/12

Please Write part 6

Great stories write a 6th an 7th part

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by Anonymous07/27/12

The best chapter

This is the best chapter... I don't like it when he shares his mom with his friends

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by Brandie6909/14/12

Very nice, opto

Cleverly executed, and seriously hot :)

B

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by Anonymous09/18/12

WOW

Hot as hell...one of the best I've ever read...5 stars

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by LAROC11/11/12

GREAT IDEA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH !!!!!!!! TO BE YOUNG AND HAVE A NEW CAMERA , AND A MOTHER LIKE THIS ONE. THIS SERIES IT SO HOT. MY COMPUTER IS SMOKING. YOUR WRITING IS GREAT , BUT YOU CAN'T LEAVE US WITH ONLY ONE SERIES . NOT WHEN I WAN'T TO BE A FAN . THANK YOU LAROC OF AGES

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by LAROC11/11/12

ON TO CHAPTER TWO

HOPE THIS IS AS GOOD AS CHAPTER ONE. LAROC OF AGES

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by yummymike11/18/12

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I went through a whole bottle of red wine & at least 15 cigs reading that & with my cock in my hand!!!!!!!

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by gregbabe12/25/12

Arousing !

Yes, very arousing and provocative.

gregbabe

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by Anonymous01/10/13

hornyboy

Waaaoow!Im wordless after reading this story.Like one of the readers ,i nearly drank a bottle of wine ,with my big cock in my hand!He is cute the guy,how,step by step,he arrived to finally have his gorgeous Mom sucking and fucking him!!

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by gondaol03/13/13

Great read but the ending was a total loss.

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by Anonymous08/21/13

Say "Sleaze!"

Wow! My mother and I loved your story. She sat naked on my lap at the computer and I felt her up and fucked her as we read your story. We do this every night that we're not out swinging with other mother-son couples, or even mother-daughter couples. We acted a lot of it out loud, until we got into the second page and we were grunting through our own real-life orgasms! I came in her two solid cums before we got to the end. Then she told me to get my camera! Oh yeah!!

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by Anonymous09/08/13

You ruined it

This was a really great concept, and really well written in terms of pacing but you completely ruined it with the constant ehhhhhhh.

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The story did what it was set out to do...

It made me hard and it made me cum. Thanks.

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by Anonymous12/15/13

The antithesis of smart

Surely, no one is that stupid or gullible. Her IQ must parallel that of a sunflower.

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by A_Little_Naughty05/27/14

Loved it!

Wonderful story. I would love to see it written from the mom’s perspective too. I am dripping wet after cumming 3 times while reading the story. The fantasy of “pretending” with my son is one of my favorites! It reminds me of my fantasies I had of me and my dad when I was younger and still living at home. Does enjoying the fantasy make me naughty mommy Or just a son fucking whore?

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by Anonymous06/20/14

great great and very hot story cant wait for the time he talkd his dad into joining them

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by Anonymous07/18/14

One of the best

This is among the 5 best incest stories I've ever read...why don't you write anymore?

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by YoungStud2308/03/14

sexy story

That was amazing I have pre sperm soaked in my calvin kleins. Keep up the sexiness

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by Anonymous08/24/14

What A Mom Will Do For Her Son

A wonderful story of what a perverted son can get his mom to do for him, right to the point of her sucking him off after he fucked her virgin ass! I don't know how he could do it, but am glad he did. Unfortunately it doesn't seem to leave anything for a sequel!
But I see there are four more chapters to come, so lets read on, and see!

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by Anonymous10/14/14

butt fucking seems to be very much in vogue these days .....as I am bi. I can tell you that both men and women love it (I love both receiving and giving myself )

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by KINKYCanada10/26/14

I loved it all! Except!

I loved the story until you started with all the "Mommy talk!" Sorry but I hate it when writers use the term "Mommy". He's not five he's a grown man... In my opinion it's infantile and childish which was not where this story was going, It's wasn't him being a little boy for her. Now with that said I found all the rest very hot and I am going to read all the rest of your works. Keep it up... Write me back if you wish as I would love an open forum with you!

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