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Persuading Shy Mom to Pose

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by Anonymous

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by Ahabscribe01/16/08

Loved it!

A really fun and sexy story. I like the way you just began to build momentum and never stopped. Looking forward to the next!

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by SweetieBBW01/16/08

OMG

That was so fucking hot!!! I loved how he 'tricked' her into being the slut she so needed to realize. What a lucky mom she was!! I have to put my fingers to better use then typing now..thank you for an amazingly pussy drooling story!!!

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by Anonymous01/16/08

YOU PERVERT

You pervert ,but then so am I.Very erotic,anti incest people please dont ruin it by a silly comment.Or marking it down go and read something you just might like,not only that if you do decide to make a comment at least leave an e mail address where we can contact you

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by Joyce1906301/16/08

Another good tale fucked up with a sickening

tale of licking a dirty, smelly shithole--Gid I had to fight the urge to throw up

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Very hot !

Well done writing - and a very hot seduction. Keep up the good work !

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Well you do that

Joyce,or whatever your name is Why read incest stories if you are so offended,do you get a peverted pleasure out of making nasty remarks.By the way Joyce we happen to know your IP addess,so ??????

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Here we go

The real perverts are in full flood,No1 Joyce,and now the sheepshagger

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by Anonymous01/16/08

A llittle about Joyce

JOYCE thinks it fine to make stupid remarks yet "It" will not accept any contact without an e mail address,Joyce you are sick very sick.

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Relax Already

First off let me start by saying the story was outstanding. As far as Joyce goes, well correct me if I am wrong, but her only complaint about the story was "ass to mouth" involvement. Well she or "it" is allowed to have an opinion. Everyone of us has their turn ons and offs. I could understand the harsh response from some readers if she was upset about "Incest" in the story after reading a story in the Incest section. However, that is not the case. She simply did not like one aspect of the story. So relax everyone, it was a great story and you can not please everyone all the time. (period)

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by Anonymous01/16/08

RELAX

I am yet to see "joyce" make a constructive comment about anyone,believe you me I am very relaxed.MORSE

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by Anonymous01/16/08

make it hotter with hubby/dad joining in

as a hot/sexy woman i love reading family fun stories..especially when they include hubby/dad in the action...and especially when mom is turned on to watching and participating in hot bi play with dad/son.hope you include the latter if you continue your story.and forget about that nut"joyce"...

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Wonderful Idea

Very well written and built me up as It progressed. It also gave me a very nasty idea to buy my son a camera and leave this story on his desk top then see what he does. LOL Only in my naughty mind.

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Whew!

Hotter than a hot thing in a heatwave when the air conditioning has broken down...

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Stupid

Cock going from ass to mouth was just sick and unhealthy.

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Hey stupid

What you say may very well be true,but this is a fantasy "channel",and the first time I saw shit packs for sale was in the USA.This story is exactly what the author states,Incest Taboo

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Others are fucking stupid

To those offering negative comments: FUCK OFF! This is a good story!

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Too Hot!

I came right when he popped his cock in her ass. Keep up the good work and write more of these "trickster" incest stories.

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by Anonymous01/17/08

Why the focus on asses?

I don't get the enthusiasm for anal sex. Vaginas are made for penises, asses are not. Vaginas make lubrication, asses do not. Asses bleed when penetrated, vaginas don't.

Are you are a frustrated homosexual?

I loved the story until buttfucking became the focus

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by Gitano7101/17/08

Very good

Too crazy at the end, but I loved everything else.
The pace moved nicely.
I liked the innocent like taking of pics and then the progression.

Keep it up.

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by optocynic01/17/08

Thank for the kind words guys.

Hi Joyce,

I just wanted to say hi, and thank you for your constructive critisism on my first attempt at an erotic story.
Sorry if the rimming and ATM distressed you, but for me, it never make's me feel ill. Maybe that's because I'm usually with people that know how to use the shower, and keep their crack clean....

Thanks for reading it anyway!!

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by Anonymous01/17/08

You Have A Future!

I enjoyed your fantasy story very much and the camera was the perfect prop. Cannot wait to read your next offering and for those out there that did not appreciate the build and a mother son relationship or a daughter and father relationship just try and remember back to some of your earliest memories.

One of mine was when I was very young and my mother used to take me into the bathroom (I was a bit destructive when left alone)when she took a bath. In fact, we often took baths together and it was during that time that I used to look at her trimmed pussy and actually rub it. She let me!

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by epiphany6501/17/08

Great beginning

Although this is your first Literotica submission I doubt it's your first attempt at writing -- or at least it doesn't seem so. Despite some minor problems with punctuation, this story is well-written and very erotic. I hope to see more submissions from you.

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by Anonymous01/17/08

So hot!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm taking pics of my mother in law for some time....wish i could get so far as this story....hmmmmmmm

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by Anonymous01/17/08

Damn Hot

This story was so hot I went and search "Camera" on literotica to find more like it. I'm truly impressed and the theme really was great. Nice work. I look forward to finding more of your stories and more like this.

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by Anonymous01/18/08

brilliant.

Loved the story, surely mom will pose for his friends sooner or later and slowly be turned into a real slut. plenty to do with this, hope you carry on in the same vain.

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by Anonymous01/20/08

Really hot!!

WOW!! You made a great story!! I hope you can do more of these stories where the son talks or persuades his sexy mother with nice breasts to do blow jobs and other very sexual situations with him and/or maybe later, a few friends
of his drop by while he is away and they are able to persuade or talk her into giving them blow jobs and other fun things!! Again, thank you for this great story!!

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by Anonymous01/20/08

compliments !!!!

...good story, good pace, fine writing... I'd prefer if son nailed mom's vagina but the story is really good!!! keep on writing you're very good!!!

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by ilike2tapherass01/22/08

Reply to Anonymous in New Zealand

I think you've bought into the "religious conservative" campaign against anal sex. Contrary to their published views (propaganda), anuses do not necessarily bleed when penetrated, even when not lubricated – the anus does produce mucus. Further, many women like anal sex. Some actually prefer it to vaginal sex. A couple I know rely on anal sex for her to achieve orgasm because entering through the anus is the only way that he can get an angle to her G-spot. Still further, plenty of completely heterosexual men engage in anal sex. For that matter, plenty of heterosexual women do too - many more than used to because the word is out that anti-anal lore is propaganda. Now, more than ever, younger women who have not been brainwashed do it and enjoy it.

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by Anonymous01/22/08

repeat?

This story sounds overly familiar. Perhaps it is the subject matter but it sounds almost like a story I've read on here before.

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by Anonymous01/23/08

H O T T T !

I echo anonymous from Canada.

This could be a great series revolving around posing for the camera; especially for son's friends

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by merf6802/20/08

Read it before?

Quote: "This story sounds overly familiar. Perhaps it is the subject matter but it sounds almost like a story I've read on here before."

Check out "My son the photographer" by qdata. VERY similar plot line.

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by Anonymous02/25/08

Naive fantasies meet a defeated super ego

Very engaging writing and almost like a countdown. It just goes to show that fantasies have very little to do with realities.
Keep writing..but please no children or marriage in the sunset.
Max M Capacity

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by ttvttp03/10/08

Great Job

Very good just needs some editing if you would like an editor im up for the job.

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by Anonymous04/10/08

Great story

The magic is in the seduction, if you are up for it i suggest you re write taking much longer to close the deal, 1. nude, 2. bj, 3 vs, 4. anal and then add friends. You are very good making the dialogue sound believable drag it out longer but keep it sounding real. Lot's of people want to do things they do not want to admit to even as they do them. Great work.(i've read all three)

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by Anonymous04/12/08

Imagine...

- if they could make pornmovies like this, instead of those boring in-and-outs (and a little better acting, of course)

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by jimbob222910/01/08

Awesome Story

I really enjoyed the story and how the son talked his mom into posing.....I wanted him to do more like talking her into letting him get her pregnant (my personal choice). Enjoyed rest of series.

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by Anonymous11/28/08

Simply Amazing

Great story!!!! I really liked how the story grew, slowly from posing with her blouse slightly open to the point where he was fucking her ass. Simply amazing!!!!

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by Anonymous03/27/09

OMG!!!! Is there a Nobel Prize for this

One of the best stories I have came across. Please continue the series or come up with a new one.

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by Anonymous07/13/09

Unbelievable

Totally and utterly unbelieveable.

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by Anonymous09/06/09

Top Story

Fantastic story. Very hot and keep up the good work.

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by dolly_tart02/12/10

Anal Love

As a lesbian from the UK who loves anal sex... Yes I know its a wierd concept... It was an sweet story! Loved it... Oh by the way I have had anal sex many, many times- with and without lube and not once did my ass bleed... Just for the record...

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by Xodan03/26/10

Great Story

I loved the "progession" like others here. the result is very realistic and very Hot.

Even if for a first time she seems very enthusiastic ;)


Thanks for this very good story

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by PlacidoSwann04/30/10

well crafted

A hot and controlled build. Very well done.

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by Anonymous05/09/10

i love it

my own son has talked me into getting naked for him so i know how it feels i love getting nude for him it makes me so hot the way he looks at me

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by cr200107/16/10

So HOT!!!

This is one amazingly fun story. Naughty boy. ;)

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by Anonymous08/18/10

Well written!

Nice slow build-up and with a great finish in the end.

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by digdaddyrich09/17/10

Very erotic

A clever story that is really hot, well written and the concept of the story unfolds nicely giving the reader a treat.

Thanks

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by Anonymous09/29/10

well written

very well written, so hot

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by Anonymous10/03/10

Great ... until

the anal commenced, I guess. Can there not be a single story on the net without any of that anal nonsense?

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by Mag5810/28/10

Different and exciting

A very well written story; but I would have made the Mum shyer - just following his commands...not talking as much. But is good.

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