All Comments on 'Lisa's Lust Ch. 02'

Perhaps the brothers can take turns impregnating these two girlfriends and a community marriage gets developed?

I liked the way the story evolved. It wasn't just another one of those stories that just jumped right into the sex. The author took the time to develop a feel for the story. The ending left me a little curious because the story could go anywhere from there. Hope to read part 3 in the near future.

Great, just great. Full of passion. Don't be too late to write the episode 3.

I loved the story I had a very similiar experience I was fucking my sister-in-law but I pumped my baby seed into and pumped my seed deep into her and gave her my baby as she pleaded for me to do it,

Keep this story going with the girlfriend getting pregnant from Rick and you getting pregnant from Rick's brother. Then develop the two couples into a 4-way marriage all under one roof, each women getting alternate pregnancies from the two brothers.

Special for the impregnation at all cost (or reason) crowd… Give them the baby (on the way) and as long as it’s NOT within a marriage (or any sort of mutually respectful relations) and they’d swallow it hook, line, and sinker (and ask for more)… Now who am I to interfere with the rare pleasures of this fetish niche? <P>

I happened to stumble on this story, and confess to having difficulties getting anything out of it even as I was fast forwarding over the seemingly endless repetitious erotic scenes. Noteworthy (as in amusing) were the images such as when Jimmys long tongue is mentioned in reference to the Giraffe’s tongue they watched at the zoo - and that was the big turn on for Lisa (and presumably the readers) To me it just contaminated the image of an animal I like.. BTW, that was not the worst or the most cliché’d image in the story. Some seem to borrow from the dark detective genre, which is kind of funny given the lack of any connection other than the image, and some are the regular (also out of context) collection of demeaning language (‘whore’ ‘slut’ ‘cheating slut’ etc.) which lasts exactly as long as they…do their thing, when Jimmy morphs back into his respectful and sensitive self … I raised my rating for this one for its amusement value.

that's a hot little twist ... hope there's a part 3!

Hmm Go on add another .....love to read more

That was a great twist! I loved it. Now what?

What a story, very sexy and hot, Jimmy must be a hot man, Lisa loves it, Shes also a bit of a slut, feel a bit sorry for Rick, i wonder if Lisa falls pregnant to Jimmy? Who knows, cant wait for part three

cant wait for part three

So, her husband, the man that she described as loving, caring, a good husband, battles cancer, only to find out his wife is a slut, fucking his own brother, and instead of being upset, he just watches and gets head from another whore? Yeah, right. It's bad enough that she cheats, but the to turn him into a cuck? No wonder there's no sequel to this.

WOW!!! What a great read. Perhaps not what one would expect in your marriage but an amazing story. Thanks for writing this story.

I keep hoping for more chapters

You really need to expand your vocabulary, there are other words besides cream, creamy... repetitious ruined the story for me. Good luck with your writing.