All Comments on 'Babysitting Perks'

I certainly had my crushes on older men when I was that age, and I appreciate the story being sexy, not creepy!

Loved it. I hope you plan to continue this story. I think it has great potential to be more than just one installment. Please continue!

Please continue with more adventures for Anna and George.

I had more than a few fantasies about some of the dads I babysat for; but I was too chicken to do anything about it. Thanks for the story.

your sub-titles--The whole story lacked realizm but the shit hole thing was above and beyond

It brings back memories of fun times I had with a few of my favorite dads... and a few of the moms too....

I loved it, very well written, disregard the idiots who say things ugly just to be ugly.

The babysitter needs to develop a need to have his baby.

A great first submission. I hope to read many more of your stories.

A great first submission. I hope to read many more of your stories. I coud do without the anal business, though.

Excellent... well-written... thanks for sharing.

I hope you have more material - that was excellent

Loved the story, you must do more chapters and develop the character of Anna. Maybe George has some friends who would like to meet Anna, I'm sure Anna could handle a gangbang in the near future.

Great job! I loved it.

Very hot and sexy! Good start with a lot of potential for an interesting relationship between these two. Looking forward to finding out what happens the morning after.

Loved it until the anal stuff. A woman's cunt is for love and pleasure, her anus is for shitting.

Amazing! Loved it and can't wait for chapter 2!!

Where do I sign up for this babysitter? I really enjoyed the story. Great job. I hope you contine to write.

Well-written and extremely hot . . . a special fantasy brought to life by a talented writer. Thanks!

Very HOT! I hope you find time to write more soon!

I'd love a squel. I'll babysit if I get to babysit for Mr. Riley.

Don, I've asked you to stop commenting with your rude comments on my stories. Just because you like pregnancy stories doesn't mean everyone does, and it's not my fault it's not in the anal category - I originally had it there and it was moved by the Lit admins. So stop already! I don't care if you don't like anal - go read something else instead of wasting your time on my stories, then! There's plenty of them out there that fit what you like, just leave me alone!

This was AWESOME there are NEVER hot men to fuck while out babysittting...where does mr riley live? haha

I especially enjoyed the vivid details. It brought this little encounter to life. Two come to mind: the mention of electric tit-to-clit connection that some women experience and the flushed chest of sexually-charged Anna.

And don't worry about the complaints about anal sex. A member search for females with "anal" as fetish yields a list of 1,975. Many women like to get filled up in various ways. Some like to get filled up in all three ways. ;-)

In the scenario of the story, the man doesn't have to worry about getting the babysitter pregnant if he pumps his hot seed up into her bowels instead of her pussy.

You have incredible talent as a writer. Your story was erotic, the perfect fantasy written in a believable way. I loved it! I hope you write more soon.

I've read a couple of your other stories and find them extremely well written and with an enhanced realism.

I am amazed that the posters here who are so caught up in "natural sex" don't like your stories. Sometimes you just have to laugh when you realize that they protest the way they do because that's their "real" fetish.

A well-paced seduction and loved the anal climax.

I loved the well-paced build up and accidental seduction. Your writing has a very natural feel to it. It was also easy to believe and enter into because of the realistic description of the house of the single father and situation with his son. The calm willingness and desire of your character is really arousing and I loved the anal climax. I hope you continue to follow your own sensibilities and not listen to the anal-haters (what do they have stuck up their butts anyway? there is plenty of other stuff to read). Anyway, I like your writing very much and look forward to your future efforts. I'd be very interested in knowing what you think of my recent series if you have the inclination to read it.

Basically well done. I do think It could be improved by slowing down the seduction, stretching it out a bit. This would build sexual tension in the characters AND in the readers.

This story could have been so much more erotic. I'm not sure that ass-fucking goes with fucking a teenaged baby-sitter because as that baby-sitter she should be more concerned with trying to have her own baby. In looking back at my own experiences as a teenager, ass-fucking was not in the desires of myself or the girl I was with, and ass-fucking would have gradually come along after some pregnancies and cuming in a hot pussy. I don't mean to be knocking your stories, but in this "fantasy" world or Literotica, it would seem that it would be much more erotic to be fucking a hot wet pussy in a teen, than sliding a hot dick up some shithole?

Fantastic,great pace and wonderful climax. I wasnt expecting the anal and it surprised me, but in a very good way. Thanks for a job well done. Your writing is pacey, sexy, surprising and leaves me wanting more. well done.

johnross1975

I hope she gets a regular job "babysitting".

Next chapter?

Loved it so so much and well developed story you have great talent and lots of sex appeal. PS the anal was very sexy no matter what anyone says IM A WOMAN AND WE LOVE ANAL

This story is amazing and deserves a follow-up to it!

Beautifully written, good plot development also.

please?

I love this story. I hope you write another chapter!

I just love all your stories. Please write more of this!!

Great! Keep on writing em, LILY-ANN.

two of my three biggest fantasies are babysitters and anal...had she peed on him this story would have been perfect! well written and hot action. thank you.

Thank you. Perfecty written.

Thanks, I really enjoyed this - particularly the sincere tone of the protagonist. A very sexy story, well-paced and very well told.

I normally don't like babysitter stories, they feel too contrived. But this was beautifully told and so very hot, I love that he wasn't cheating on his wife because she'd already left. Fantastic.

I thought it was a 5 Star effort. Thank you.

;)

just read the story it was great you could do more chapters that would be great

This is a delightful story, true to life feelings, lovely plot. Could have done without the anal, as I feel this may not have developed this early in the relationship. A strong suggestion toward a deeper relationship between the two adults, and a good connection between the young woman and little boy. This story just begs for more chapters! Thank you. GG

Love your stories!! A chapter 2 would be amazing.

I had an orgasm just reading this.

Great story. Reminds me of my wife when we first started dating years ago. She used to babysit for a couple that worked different shifts. The husband always got home a few hours earlier, I guess she had a crush on this older man. When the kids were asleep he'd take my wife to the guest room and screw her.

There are other words to use in the English language. Try some of these: awesome, fascinating, incredible, marvelous, prodigious, shocking, stunning, surprising, unbelievable, wonderful. Otherwise a great, horny story.

Good story except you seriously have to find any other word than moan or groan. For me, that ruined the whole story.

Write a second chapter!!!

Would love to read more about these two. Maybe she could even become a "live-in" babysitter.

As for the anal, a teen ass is perfect for anal! ;) And, in my experience, many younger (under 25) women DO enjoy anal. Many of them do worry about pregnancy, or want to "save themselves" for marriage, so they will give up the next best thing. A then 19 yo ex gf of mine actually preferred anal, as she said it was so naughty, as well as the intense feelings of it compared to vaginal sex.

More please! I loved this story!

good characters and plot; comes across as though there's a sequel coming later

Nothing against the story; this is for the commenters, not ALL women like Anal. If you like it say so, but don't categorize ALL ... DKP

will be looking for more from you, THX

Fucking sexy!

I have good memories from my babysitting days. In particular, I looked after my Dad's boss's children when I was a teenager. Dad's boss always came home a few hours before his wife and eat my pussy and fuck me till he filled my tight pussy with his CUM. He recently fucked me at his daughters wedding. mmmm

i would love to do anal with a girl

So if it was a blizzard, just how did Mr. Riley get home?

And then couldn't get/take Anna home?

As to the anal quite a few younger women do it to be sure to avoid pregnancy.

I loved it. I would like to read more about these two like a live in baby sitter

And they could fuck there brains everyday before she goes off to school. And getting hot and big cock and getting paid for it. He would be fucking her hot little young pussy before going to work. So they both are getting there fuck on and its their big fucking secret. And the little boy has a women in the house to help make it not so hard on him because of his mom not being there for him. So everyones fucking all happy. I know I would love to in her shoes in a heart beat.

There were only a few places you could have improved on.

The blizzard didn't make too much sense, how did he get home??

I also wish that you told us a bit more from Mr.Riley's perspective

Overall, amazing. Came so hard afterwards. Keep writing, you are really good.

4 stars

A couple of commenters have questioned how he got home and why he didn't take her home. He said the roads were bad so he could hardly get home [and the storm continued, so they were continually getting worse] and he would take her home but didn't want to wake his son [who would have to be dressed warmly to go out since he couldn't be left alone, and would be in serious danger if something happened to the car, especially returning].

It must be me, but I can't stand the idea of anal - I quit reading at that point. I like oral, but the idea of kissing a girl after she has sucked my shitty prick is disgusting. I admit, using a condom would make it a little better, but most of the time they're not using a condom, and as another commenter said, many girls do anal to avoid pregnancy [and condoms]. Also, while I haven't had anyone recently, i have never met a girl that didn't hate it. I never suggested it to my first wife, but the others made it clear that anal was not in the cards. It didn't make any difference to me anyway. I much preferred having a girl suck me off when I started to cum. My second wife usually managed to spill most of it on me so after swallowing the rest she had to lick up what she'd spilled, all the time watching me. She said she could cum just from the way I looked while she was doing that.

Author did a wonderful job writing a hot sex scene with an easy plot and simple but detailed character development. It's so obvious when an author takes the time to proof read before submitting. Thank you. Looking forward to reading more submissions from lily_ann.

We need to see part 2,3,4...

Continue the affair. get her pregnant - more than once?

great story, imagine fucking her when she gets in from school, I can !! I need her to babysit for me, what is her phone number ?!

I loved it and would've love it more if there was a chapter about the morning after. Morning sex, breakfast together with Kyle. How she was more like a desirable wife than his ex.

It definitely would be better if it was longer.

I just hope you are still around to continue it.

then snuggled together body against body -- just an old man's dream

Need to know what happened in the morning with lots of snow outside

So Sexy and Sensual. Very arousing and tantalizing. Would love to read more. Keep up the great work.

Yours,

JB

And will be great with a follow up story telling about the next period of their lives.

Just great! I agree, followup chapters leading to her moving in with her 'old man', being called mommy, marrying the old guy ;)

Please a follow up of this story would be awesome

You're a talented writer with great word choice, who was able to take something as old and done as fucking a young chick and make it into something completely intriguing, sensual, and memorable. Thank you for a fantastic read; I'm looking forward to much more from you.

In the sequel Mr. Riley quits he career and begins marketing her breast milk.

A story any male or female can relate to - especially his descriptive words on anal sex and for women, what I found they found enjoyable for their first time when done with ease and gentle entry. You again earn a five rate.

i'm so wet right now. I just want to finger fuck my self

Literally fingering myself right now

Anyone know where I can find a babysitter like her? lol

Except for the ass fucking

... with the ass fucking? It can be extremely enjoyable, for both partners, if done properly.

I know it's not for everyone, but don't knock it if you haven't tried it.

Admittedly, it was a bit odd for a first time between them, but she seemed to enjoy it.

And I enjoyed the story.

Can I baby sit for a guy like him??

Fingered my pussy and came so hard

I need a part 2 now

how do you do anal without shit coming out?haha

it was going so good, then you went to that. A waste of my time.

Please, no ass fucking.

Far better to fill her teen womb with seed and knock her up.

Get over the anal. Since 1017 people favorited the story you seem to be in the minority...

Let's just say it is now 1018 readers who have Favorited this story.

Oh my god I love this story

I love the tag of caregiver. You ain't kiddin.

5* from me.

The word “cunt “ used by a young lady - MASSIVE turn on for me. !

Doesn’t it occur to anyone that this writing has all the hallmarks of a male author. Not that I’m complaining, it’s not poorly written but it is, however, obviously not a young woman’s writing.

No stars from me because unless it’s 5 I don’t vote.

Well-written, aside from a handful of typos. Regardless of the author's gender, this deserves a high rating. The person who posted the comment on 7/26/18 obviously has no taste for thoughtfully-crafted works of fiction, but prefers to focus solely on irrelevant afterthoughts that would never cross the mind of the fairminded reader.

This reader readily rates this story 5 stars.

I will have to agree with the almost 1300 people who favorited this story. Its a excellent story. This story could have easily been a series. Its to bad the author hasn't written anything lately.

Good use of the fantasy to set up the story, both of them acting on their own fantasy. It was a good story, even if far fetched, until the anal. At that point the story lost all possibility of being a fantasy come true. It wasn't enough for Mr. Riley to have multiple romps of unbridled passionate sex with a beautiful and fit 18 year old. No, he had to INSIST that she accept anal. For a guy who claimed not to have had any sex at all for a significant period of time, Mr. Riley's desire to pass up a "perfect tight wet grasping pussy" to get the ass she didn't want to give was very weird. Anal is not the norm for most first time sessions, let alone such a special situation. That demand of his opened the gates to logic and the story falls apart. UNEXPECTED snowfalls of such magnitude have not been the norm since the early to mid 1970's. The girl said early in the story that she rarely dated, but upon seeing his dick she recognized it as "larger than most". She babysat most weeknights but took FRIDAY night off. lol She would make more on a typical Friday - Working couples stay out later on weekends - than the rest of the week put together. Riley didn't offer to drive her home because he didn't want to wake his son; then later says the boy usually wakes up only ONCE a night. If the boy awakens anyway, get him up and take him. Learning of the bad sex life of Mr and Mrs Riley got old too. Mrs. Riley had no tits, no hips, didn't like to give or receive oral, refused anal, BUT had several sets of sexy lingerie hanging in the closet. Story would have been much better with Mrs Riley left out of it except for her walking out. That would explain his horniness. Along the same lines, for a girl who rarely dated - but had sex with one boy - the babysitter seemed almost to be the aggressor. She gave a great blow job, went wild when her tits were sucked and played with, enjoyed being eaten without hesitation, gave sensual kisses that left both of them hungry for more, and fucked like a pornstar who actually enjoyed it. Then Mr. Horny Lust and Miss Nympho just end it by falling asleep cuddling after merely two cums for him. Gee Golly.

Sure, there were some inconsistencies mentioned by the other user, but i loved the cute interaction with kyle as it helped build rapport between kyra and mr. riley.

... and i thought the sex was great, i loved that she was bold enough to make a move and get what she wanted! :)

Kinda want more! Like does this become a reg thing??? Please! Give us more!!

I loved everythng about this story, especially her desire for him!!! Maybe a marriage and then a pregnant belly for her. (The first of many!!!)