by Whitesocks
Good God almighty, free at last thank god he's free at last.
What a witty and glorifying romp. It would have keep Adam and Eve in the garden. davew.ineaston@gmail.com
That was great and a fun time resulted.
Bet the virgin enjoyed every minute.
Brilliant - absolutely hilarious! I'm sure everyone would like to see more chapters of this one. Keep up the good work.
You are a very good writer and I loved your humour.
You certainly have a talent.
If only God treated us all like that.
very erotic and humourous at the same time. i like the way you left story open for more chapters keep up the good work
I held on through the monotony of the beginning, thank god. It was well worth the read. More...
the best erotic i've read in quite some time
and i was laughin the whole way through
Excellent! Very tongue in cheek, but still very sexy. Lighthearted luscious lewdness--love it!
I laughed. I wanked. I laughed some more. I arrived. Great story!
A well written tongue in cheek ( and other places) story. Simultaneously humorous and horny. Must read more of your work
if not the best story I've ever read on Literotica, certainly One of the best. Brilliant!!!!!
One of the best I've read in a long while. It's hard to masturbate when you're laughing, but not impossible, lol. Just the right blend of humor and erotica. Mrs. Anderson stole the show and it was very entertaining to watch the unleashing of her buried sexual frustrations.
I've marked this as one of my favorites and will come back to read it again because it is so well done. Great job!
And that's how a story should be, funny and sexy. Rated 5*
It deserves a sequel
I don't like stories where a spouse gets away with cheating, but in this excellent and hilarious story, she did not! Regardless, I think I would have given her a pass because her sex life was so pathetic.
While I was happy you brought the husband and daughter into the picture at the end, I felt like it needed a few more pages. Harold could have rediscovered his wife and found that the exercise due to their significant and varied play time improved his heart.
When Maria truly found religion, James and she could become exclusive when he discovered that she was almost more than he could handle. Perhaps you could add another chapter so we could see what happens next.
Thanks for writing!
I enjoyed this as much as the others you have written. Funny, sexy and delightful!