All Comments on 'God or the Devil?'

by Whitesocks

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lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
Very Droll

Most enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
uplifting spirit

Good God almighty, free at last thank god he's free at last.

What a witty and glorifying romp. It would have keep Adam and Eve in the garden. davew.ineaston@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A Fun Time for All

That was great and a fun time resulted.

Bet the virgin enjoyed every minute.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What a hoot!

Brilliant - absolutely hilarious! I'm sure everyone would like to see more chapters of this one. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Home run!!!

Excellently entertaining story! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very very good

You are a very good writer and I loved your humour.

You certainly have a talent.

If only God treated us all like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wow

very erotic and humourous at the same time. i like the way you left story open for more chapters keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great story, great author

Most excellent!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Slow start but....

I held on through the monotony of the beginning, thank god. It was well worth the read. More...

ssbbwlibrarianssbbwlibrarianabout 16 years ago
phenomenol work. funny sexy and hot

the best erotic i've read in quite some time

and i was laughin the whole way through

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
TIC

Excellent! Very tongue in cheek, but still very sexy. Lighthearted luscious lewdness--love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hard Comedy....Very Rare!

I laughed. I wanked. I laughed some more. I arrived. Great story!

Harper2Harper2about 14 years ago
loved it

A well written tongue in cheek ( and other places) story. Simultaneously humorous and horny. Must read more of your work

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
This is

if not the best story I've ever read on Literotica, certainly One of the best. Brilliant!!!!!

fireguy365fireguy365over 11 years ago
Once is not enough

One of the best I've read in a long while. It's hard to masturbate when you're laughing, but not impossible, lol. Just the right blend of humor and erotica. Mrs. Anderson stole the show and it was very entertaining to watch the unleashing of her buried sexual frustrations.

I've marked this as one of my favorites and will come back to read it again because it is so well done. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LOL!

Wonderfuckingful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hilarious

A load of sexy laughs!

chachajaanichachajaaniover 9 years ago
5* story

And that's how a story should be, funny and sexy. Rated 5*

It deserves a sequel

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 9 years ago
Could Have Been in LW

I don't like stories where a spouse gets away with cheating, but in this excellent and hilarious story, she did not! Regardless, I think I would have given her a pass because her sex life was so pathetic.

While I was happy you brought the husband and daughter into the picture at the end, I felt like it needed a few more pages. Harold could have rediscovered his wife and found that the exercise due to their significant and varied play time improved his heart.

When Maria truly found religion, James and she could become exclusive when he discovered that she was almost more than he could handle. Perhaps you could add another chapter so we could see what happens next.

Thanks for writing!

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 9 years ago
Good One!

I enjoyed this as much as the others you have written. Funny, sexy and delightful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5 stars

5 stars.

ErotFanErotFanover 8 years ago
AN enjoyable fantasy

Hilarious thru & thru.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lol

Funniest story I've ever read

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