All Comments on 'A Gypsy's Tale Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
this is awsume

you have to keep up this story I've been waiting for weeks for the next entry

starry_nightstarry_nightabout 16 years ago
Please continue!

I just finished reading four chapters today, and your writing is getting better with each chapter! I'm really enjoying the pace of this story and am glad the characters aren't just jumping into bed together. I also like that it's different from other stories where the prince has slept with more women than he can count. It is a nice change to have Esric as inexperienced as Tecor. This way, they're learning about love and pleasure together. Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it

Just finished reading all four chapters, and i really enjoyed it. I noticed that the spelling has improved with each submision and that's always a good thing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work with this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More!!!

This is one of my favourite stories on here, please, please continue!! xx

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