by Bill_the_Butcher
This is one of the most realistic stories I have read on erotica. Are you the "fat" girl?
Thanks for the appreciation.
I'm only rating this because if I don't I can't post this comment. Please disregard the rating.
Well, I'm not a girl, I'm sorry to say. It's fiction.
A very well written story that features a character not out of the cookie cutter mold. We need more stories here that have this kind of realism.
As someone else said, Thank you for writing a fiction outside of society's view of 'normal'. Fat girls are beautiful too! From a Fat Girl-Invisible2u
This was very well written from her point of view. Thank you for writing it you did it in a way that was not the slightest bit gratuitous to fat girls.
I loved it!! I for one think that a person should be judged for what's inside....not how big or small they are. The best loving I ever had was ( and is ) with a BBW. So many people don't know what they are missing by narrowing their choices by ignoring many wonderful women.
Please continue to write more on this subject.
i can relate to what the girl was feeling in the story. well done,.
I am normally not that crazy about the "fat girl can't get a date" type of story, since I think it's demonstrably untrue, but this was a good one, sincere and heartfelt. It obviously hit a chord because look at all the comments, way more than BBW stories like mine normally get (fat girl stories can't get a comment, usually!) I've been reasonably adjusted to this fact, that it's a niche audience which is probably a little hesitant to comment publicly, but now I wonder. Do my stories need to lose weight? Does this dress make them look fat? Anyway, a nice story which sent me off on a tangent, I'll check out more of yours and feel free to do the same!
The story touched my soul. I am not fat. Nor did I find the story erotic. This story has been by far the best that I have read in a long time purely because of your style of writing. The reader begins to get involved with the fat girl and begins emoting along with her. Its a Classic! Hoping to read many more such stories. All the Best!
This story touched my soul, too. I am fat. Her story is my story. Okay, I don't cry after I orgasm--I rejoice in masturbating, and I have taught my friends, fat and thin alike, to do the same--and I am still a virgin, but feelings of inadequacy and self-doubt have plagued my life and stunted my sexual and emotional growth.
In its simplicity and honesty, this story is beautiful.
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I happened upon it, by looking at your profile after reading one of your comments on another person's story/article. Your comment there, intrigued me and so I thought I'd look you up and check out some of your writing. And I am glad I did. This story was touching, semi-erotic and one of the best stories I have read. Even though you say it is fiction, in some ways, it feels like a true story to me. Probably because it is similar to what I have gone through. Not exactly the same, but similar. Before I lost my virginity, I had never even imagined that I would do anything sexually other than missionary. Now that I have lost my virginity and explored to some extent the wonderful world of sexual gratification, I've found that I tend to be much wilder in bed than I ever imagined. It's fun and I'm glad I have explored. I hope that in the years to come I will be able to explore more and read some more of your work. Wonderful story. Thanks for writing it. :)