All Comments on 'Chub – Bad Girl'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Goodness someone turned the heating up a few notches ... I may have to strip ...

Underyourspell masquerading as anonymous!

What is this??? More like the horn of plenty of top notch erotica than a single poem. If you ask me, poems like this should be the model of a poetry section in an erotic web site. <P>

YOU -mute? I think not and when you talk, I for sure will listen.

I want more "BAD" poems like that!

This is so erotic with none of the graphic description that is often offered. Well done!

Tess

though longer than the average poem here. A whole story packed into such well chosen words.

Bad girl ! I love your word play,

and the scene you paint with your

poetic brush. I love the waiting, and

taunting.......and the little girl who

later admits, she is a bad girl.

That was a bad piece, of fine writing !

sGp

Sometimes I think that well written written poetry is a beauty that can't be quantified until you're face to face with it, looking and knowing; feeling the perfect satisfaction of the right words woven together in the right ways. And you've done that here. Nothing is wasted in this poem. Truly excellent.

sweet. I love the flow here and your casual intent to draw us out with the mute mummbles about teasing our/his cerrbrum. Sexy my friend, sneaky sexy, lol. Nice, silzzle in this pen ~~