All Comments on 'The Adventures of a Step-Mom Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
In the right direction

I like the way the story is going so far. Keep with the storyline that you started. I think this story could and should go far.

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
A bit of a teaser....

This story could evolve into something more erotic. Perhaps it needs some more chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This Isn't Worth Reading

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hurry !

Hurry and get back from Mexico.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Batteries not included

Hope she packed a friend to help her get over it. Good start to a story. Maybe it will lead to two boyfriends when Mrs C gets back? Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
THIS STORY SUCKS

THIS STORY IS AS BORING AS CABLE PORN.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More please

Good start, keep it going maybe she can enjoy a few young studs in Cancun and some of her daughters boyfriends mates when she returns home.

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
Make your step daughter a mommy at the same time.

You need to use your step-daughter's boyfriend's sperm to make you a mommy, so that when they marry you will also be a grandma to your own baby.

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