All Comments on 'Selfish'

"the ringer was set to no" Good line and good poem.

Nice build up to the release of her words of passion.

I love the sensual, evocative images and the tres sexy ending. I'm really enjoying reading the poems you submit here. I didn't comment on it (boo on me!), but I absolutely loved that jazz/blues piece you wrote a short while back. Keep em coming!

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)

Yes yes yes !

Sexy (you know that), clever and well constructed (prolly know that too, or should), funny.

Funny is almost always really sexy, q.v.