All Comments on 'Dinner Time Ch. 01'

I read your story and thought it was wonderful. I read lots on here but this really did it for me, please please please lets have more of the same. You have a real aptitude to write and I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks for making my day

excellent job. can't wait for the other chapters.

I like reading about someone who takes control...but doesn't need to make you bleed..keep up the good work.:)